Some People Prefer To Eat At Food Stalls Or Restaurants Other People Prefer To Prepare Food At Home
Food is one of the important aspect in day to day life. We need food in order to strive daily. We eay food in order to get energy from it. In today's busy world there are many people who usually eat their food at some restaurants or even on the food stands rather than preparing it at home. I would always prefer food which is prepared at home for many reasons.
First, we eat food in order to get nutrition in order to get energy. In most of the cases, the food which we get in the restaurants or on the stands have very low nutritional values and would be unhealthy. For example, there are many food items like pizzas which have low nutritional values but a huge source of fats and carbohydrates which is not good for our body if we consume it on the daily basis. In contrast, if we prepare food at home then we can include fruits and vegetables which have abundant supply of nutritional components which would lead to a good health.
Second, nowadays eating at a fancy restaurant has become very expensive and so eating regularly at restaurants would be pinch to our pockets as eating at restaurants can become very expensive. But if we prepare food at home then comparatively it is cheaper and would save a lot of money as restaurants charges many taxes on the food items which would be minimized. Also there can be the case that the restaurants are not using good quality ingredients for the dishes and can harm us in many different ways and people eating from restaurants may have many different diseases.
Third, in many food stalls hygiene is not given much importance. In many small food stalls it can be that vegetables and fruits which are used in food items are not washed properly or even the plates and glasses which are used are not properly washed and may cause many diseases. But if prepare food at home we can maintain proper hygiene and also use good quality ingredients which can be used .
That is why I would prefer preparing the food and eating at home as it would keep my health in good condition and would also save a lot of money and would have an positive impact on my health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, then, third, for example, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49095607235 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42189475087 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.403100775194 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5661837077 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.625 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1875 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404521187348 0.236089414692 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159777503652 0.076458572812 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109063857426 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257582391079 0.150856017488 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127095973386 0.0645574589148 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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