In order to be a successful person, everyone focuses on special things. Some people plan to achieve their real goals, others pay attention to their ambitious dreams. A hot debate arises in this regard that which one is more practical for a person. I am, and probably will always be, one of those who agree with such an idea that a person would be more successful when has ambitious dreams and focuses on them. In the following lines, I will elaborate on the most outstanding reasons.
First and foremost, ambitious dreams distinguish a person from other people. I mean, people are different from each other and these differences come from their mind and their dreams; because no two persons have the same idea and the same dreams in their lives. Real goals are clear for everyone and every person can plan to achieve them soon or late. In contrast, dreams are more challenging and they need high efforts and a perfect plan; hence, everyone could not achieve his dreams. Can a person achieve his or her dreams, he or she will be distinguished from others and bold among people. This is a real success.
Secondly, ambitious dreams motivate a person in order to continue and achieve his goals and makes his dreams real. “A person is live with his dreams.”, this is a sentence that we hear a lot from people. people never be satisfied by obtaining real goals; because they have wanted something different from their lives. Hence, they have a big motivation, their dreams and they prefer to obtain them. I talked to my sister, the most important person in my life, and she told me never give up your dreams, dreams cause you continue and never be satisfied with small goals or everything people have, commonly. The more a person pays attention to his dreams, the more successful he would be.
To put it briefly, based on the reasons I mentioned above, a person would be different and bold among people just by making his dreams real although real goals have relatively crucial effects on people’s lives. Not only do dreams make a person different but also they are a big motivation for going on and be successful in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, i mean, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74598930481 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48052986206 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475935828877 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.17207154 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4210526316 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6842105263 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15789473684 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184829959782 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638917585287 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412635157193 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124308612194 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241771612352 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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