Some people prefer keeping old friends. Other people like making new friends. Which one do you prefer?
Our friends play an important role in our daily life because we have a mutual relationship with them in all parts of our life. So, it is crucial to have best friends. While some people prefer having new friends, other people prefer keeping their old friends. Both ideas have their merits and demerits. However, from my point of view, I think to make a new friend is better for two mani reasons. In the following paragraphs, I am going to explain the reasons for my selection.
First of all, it is widely accepted that human being likes to experience various things like environmental, situation, job, vehicle and so forth. One of the most important things which are comprised of all the aforementioned factors is friends. Friendship plays an important role in all situations. Because people often like to experience all things with both their family and their friends. They live with their families and have interaction with their friends. As I mentioned, people like to experience various situations. So, they would like to have different friends. Because a different friend has a different background, favorites and so on. To achieve this, they make new friends as many as they can. For example, some friends may like to travel by personal car, the others may prefer traveling by train. Moreover, some friends might be poor and some others might be rich. So, different favorites and backgrounds would result in various friends.
Second of all, all people would need help during their life at least one time. If people have different friends, they have more chances to receive help. In other words, the more friends, the more probability of getting assistance. For example, I have a lot of friends and every day we extended our intimacy. Most of them have different jobs and they can help me in all situations. It must be mentioned that I also help them when they ask me for help. In detail, I vividly remember, I went to Mashhad, a holy city in the east of Iran last winter, and my car was broken. It was both cold and snowy night. I tried arduously to repair it but I could not. So, I called one of them which was my close friend. I describe the circumstance and he said he would come to repair my car. I waited for him and eventually, he came. He got my car fixed without any paying. I insist on paying but I was not allowed. I continued to my way and he returns home. It should be confessed that if he had not come, I would have been got stuck among the road.
In conclusion, like our family, friends play a crucial role in our life and they can assist us in many situations. So, it is a good idea to have as many friends as we can. I like to make new friends rather than keeping old friends because they not only have different backgrounds and favorites but also they would help us in many places. So make friends assist you during your life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, while, at least, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2341.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 514.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55447470817 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51756385294 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441634241245 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 708.3 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 26.0 9.59856630824 271% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 20.6003584229 184% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.240082736 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.6052631579 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5263157895 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 28.0 11.8709677419 236% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268147653621 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670679298565 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112561616374 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181581660177 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951287888549 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 11.7677419355 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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