Some people prefer to live in a small town, others prefer to live in a big city.
Nowadays, choosing the place of life is a very substantial issue for all families. Therefore, there is a hot debate about whether it is better to live in a big city or a small town. I personally subscribe to the view that it is more advantageous to inhabiting in the big city mainly because in the large town people easily improve their and the ways of progress are open for them and in these cities, knowing the different cultures can be useful for people. In-depth discussion on each of the abovementioned reasons is presented below.
First and possibly the most important reason why I believe that in the big cities people easily achieve their purposes. To be more specific, in the big cities, we conveniently know experts and specialists and it increases our chance for obtaining a suitable job’s opportunity in the future. In addition, in these cities, the migration to other advanced countries is very feasible and in conjunction with, in the large towns, the ways of progress for autonomous people is very accessible. The noteworthy statistics, revealed by recent social research concluded in our country, show that the convenience of people in industrial cities such as the capital city is very high relative to other cities. My own experience is also a compelling example of this, when I was young, to continue postgraduate studies, I have migrated the Tehran (capital of Iran) and I have been able to in this time find a very effective people in fields of my education and it increases my chance for obtaining an appropriate job. For this reason, I strongly believe that people can easily evolve in large towns.
There is a further more subtle reason we must consider, which is the fact that being in the big cities has a positive effect on the personality of people, especially children. Because knowing with the diverse cultures or behavior increases awareness of people and children could better cultivate their talent. A research carried out recently has revealed that those who grow in the big cities comparatively to other children in small cities, have a high confident and these children have an impressive future in all facet of their lives.
In a word, by taking all the aforementioned reasons into account we may draw the conclusion that living in big cities is very beneficial for people. This is primarily due to the facts that being in an expansive environment increases the chance of people for became successful and knowing the various cultures and behaviors is very vital for people, especially children.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, therefore, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2111.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94379391101 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81593503078 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487119437939 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 683.1 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.5625748252 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.733333333 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4666666667 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146104113493 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582728246658 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580506989714 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994996979838 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029502721515 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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