If i had choice, my prefereence would always lay with working for small ratherthan a large company. A smaller work environment allows people to know each other better and build personal relationships. Choosing to work for a smaller business usually means the work i would be doing is more interesting because of its specialized nature. This same small scale means that i would know the process of the busniess from beginning to end. A small business can offer an experience that isnonexiatent in larger companies.
First of all, working for a smaller business means fever employees and as such a more personal work environment. An office with twenty or fewer employees allows for everyone to know each other on more than a name-by-name basis since thay will work closer on all projects. This personal environment brings joy to employee, as they feel more valued and less like a nameplate on a cubical. When employees feel more appreciated they will be more invesred in their workand perform better. A more personal environment is good for employees and the business as a whole.
Secondly, a small business usually has a more specialize role within the economy. This means that a person can work more directly in an area of interest rather than for a large company that maybe deals with their interests but also with many other aspects of business. Working for a large company such as REI is less fulfilling than working for k2 if a person is interested in working in the Ski industry. When a person is involved in a field of interest they are more likely to do good work and the company benefits. Thus a small business again produces happier employees and a better work environment.
Lastly, a small business enviroment allows for employees to be involved in the entire process of business. In large compaies people often times havea singular task that limits their knowledge of the larger process. In a small company, however, an employee will be more involved in the business process frm begining of end. This makes employees more knowledgeable, andoffer them the satisfaction of seeing something being and end. A small business canthen create smarter, harder working people, which is good for them and the company.
Conclusively, a small business has a number of benefits to offer employees that cannot be gained from a large company. I would choose a small company because of the personal relationships that can be built. Simultaneously i would be able to work in a more specialized field that hold a greater interest for me. This would also be an environment where ican see the entire business process. A smaller business is indeniably and clearly my choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2226.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94666666667 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79063690239 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422222222222 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 691.2 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5873353309 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.04 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27395630401 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094512855305 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915368978004 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18411256674 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07775340015 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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