Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state.
Plant and wildlife both are interrelated. without forest wildlife cannot not imagine. These day wilderness area decrease day by day. So, we need to preserve precious natural wilderness area. because earth and living things are depend on it. It control pollution, Temperature and also balance population in the earth. I agree with statement nations should pass laws to preserve remaining wilderness area.
First, Pollution is serious problem. it is increasing day by day.Population is caused by human waste, industries and modern activities like testing of atoms and war equipments. population create lot of carbon, radiation and many dangerous things who affect the wildlife. Human are selfish to fulfill their need to cut the tree and destroy wildlife. For instance, For coal many forest are destroyed and it produce lot of dust, Therefore, that living thing are affected by breathing problem and Ozone layer is weeking day by day because of lack of oxygen. Ozone layer is saving us from Ultraviolet ray. UV ray create many diseases like cancer. Considering these problems, nation should take step to save wilderness area.
Second, Temperature is increasing day by day. See level is also increasing. Sea life and Earth life is suffering from this degerous impact. Ice is melting and many island is sinking in see. See and earth living thing are dying because of unbalanced and unpredictable nature. Saving from these problem we need to Save precious plant and animal. Also we need to increase forest to better earth. it will possible when government will help in.
Finally, wild life balance population and nature. There are many animal and bird who are carnivore who are eating meet. there predator is herbivore animal.For instance, Lion eat goat and Goat eat grass. If goat population will high then it will dangerous for grass. So for balance the wild population we need to forest or wilderness area. Therefore, we need to save wilderness area.
From above, We conclude that Wilderness life and area is crucial things of our life. We need to preserve Because it affect living things and our earth. If nation pass the law to save wilderness area it will very helpful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, so, then, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 358.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10335195531 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62454657968 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486033519553 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 23.0359550562 48% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7640565016 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.09375 118.986275619 48% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.1875 23.4991977007 48% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.09375 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.83258426966 331% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205038116432 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581577646244 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118874821744 0.0758088955206 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140352309504 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123953320811 0.0667264976115 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 14.1392134831 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 48.8420337079 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.12 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.8971910112 38% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 11.2143820225 57% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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