Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the m

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Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

we are blessed to be born in a race like "human being" as we are advancing day by day in many fields like technology, media, innovation etc. Homo Sapiens species is superior to other species in many ways and we evolved from ape like figure to the way we are now, working a lot to make our life comfortable as much as possible but in the journey of this evolution we forget what we are blessed with , we forgot our roots, environment, our whole ecosystem.

As we started changing and making our life comfortable, we missed how much we are harming to our environment. we are using fossil fuel, trees and so many things and not considering that this source is limited. human being has destroyed this precious life on earth. many living being have been vanished or at the verge of extinction. for example, many species have gone extinct like Tasmanian tiger, White whale etc. and many are at endangered state like vultures. by destroying our ecosystem, we are not harming one or two things we are destroying whole food chains.

this is the time we all world nations must forget our difference and unite and work together because we have only one earth and limited resources on it. As the statement says nations must makes some laws to preserve what we are left with. we still can save out planet and it is not just for saving others, its us who we are saving. many countries have laws and there are some who needs to make some tough laws which should be impossible to evade. also, there are some countries where people are illiterate, they harm environment knowingly or unknowingly, nations should spread the word and make everyone known to the issues which human being will face if not stopped or impeded now.

Furthermore, nations to have some particular days reserved for environment movements and make people aware through television, radio etc. our new generation seems more concern about their future and not us, a 16 years old environment activist, Greta Thunberg, is working hard to make people aware and she has done movements to attract attention of the world, although it was tacit but it made people realize the mistakes a human being is doing.

although we understand that nature should be preserved and we should work together to do it, there are certain limitations in it. there are many countries who are facing other life threatening challenges like food, shelter etc. they don't have enough money to provide to their population, forget about saving environment. they are facing their own impediments for living a life, saving environment becomes secondary in that scenario.

In summary, every nation should make laws to preserve what we have today and also to nations would have to come together to help and support the countries which cannot put their funds on this task as nature does not differentiate among species it's us who made boundaries and trying to protect it. so let us protect this nature, individually and together.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...much we are harming to our environment. we are using fossil fuel, trees and so man...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, so, still, for example, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 19.5258426966 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 33.0505617978 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2466.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 508.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85433070866 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57230425922 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505905511811 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 783.0 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.9709251864 60.3974514979 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.090909091 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105334629958 0.243740707755 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038254759972 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045267960394 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672809766641 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446333023518 0.0667264976115 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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