We learn our most valuable lessons in life from struggling with our limitations rather than from enjoying our successes.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Many have argued that success is not so important if we don't face any the struggles. The question that most valuable lessons are learned through struggle we face is complex and convoluted. During the struggle a person confronts a lot of difficult situations and this is the time when the true potential of a human being comes out. Without any turmoil in life one cannot enjoy the success.
Imagine the situation, you want to pass an exam if you don't put effort in that it is not going to have value in your life. It is the struggle when a person faces challenges, try to come up with solutions. The solutions might not work and the situation forces the person to come up with some other answers to deal with the problem. In the process, a person deeply dig in into the thought and unwraps the true potentials which has been hidden inside for so much long. Struggle compels the to do a lot of out of comfort zone work which a person will never learn if accustomed to the comfort zone.
Struggles shows you your true prowess and people go beyond what they can do to achievers which they truly desire. If the struggle is not there and very easy to get without any kind of problem , it will not goad you to do something unpleasant to you and will not push you towards new horizon.
Mahatma Gandhi, a freedom fighter of India, was forced by his father to learn law. Gandhi was not interested initially to get a law degree but eventually became a barrister from South Africa. Once he was travelling by a train, there was a white guy told him to leave first degree compartment as it was reserved for white people. Gandhi refused to deboard the train so he was thrown out of the compartment. It took a toll on Gandhi and he decided to fight for equality of human beings. He participated in many movements after that for different egalitarian purposes. Had he not faced this situation , he might be a barrister his whole mundane life. The struggles he faced during his tenure in South Africa, arose his true potential and a leader of a big nation like India.
It is not like success do not matter at all. It is the ultimate gift of any kind of struggle and turmoil a person faced. It is a diamond which a person wants to get and faces many struggle to achieve it. If there is no enjoyment of success at the very end of struggle, nobody is going to face any challenges. Its the magnets which allure people and make there stuggle light like a wing.
In conclusion, it is struggle which generated true potential and power a person but enjoyment of the success is equally important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, as for, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2124.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 472.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44724010615 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489406779661 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2031521534 60.3974514979 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.96 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.88 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173593159066 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485780716998 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429026491388 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992250852774 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440830045912 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 14.1392134831 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 12.1639044944 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.