Some people say that the best preparation for life is learning to be cooperative. Do others take the opposite view and say that learning to be competitive is the best preparation. Tell which one you agree with and explain why.
People start learning and experiencing every thing since they were born. Normally, parents are our first instructors. Some of them suggest that children or even any person should learn to be cooperative in his life. However, some others believe that children must be nurtured as competitive persons to be successful in their future life. I think that being raised as a competitive person can benefit you more in your life that you have ahead due to some reason which I am going to share them below.
First, nowadays life style has been changed totally and society demands humans with a certain set of skills and characteristics who will have a bright future if they acquired these before. Competitiveness is mostly mentioned by a considerable number of companies as a requirement for their fresh employees. So, when your society shows that they chiefly care more about competitive people, a sense of abandonment and frustration may be implied to the people who learned to be cooperative.
Furthermore, people who have a competitive personality earned more respect among the others around them. This attitude indirectly implies that most of the people think that competitive persons worked harder and they deserve more respect. For example, my friend Sam had an ordinary condition in his education period. He never presented any sign of cooperation in his life with other classmates or outside people. But, he fought for every thing during his high school period and even after that which made him to look like a person who compete for everything and he never gave up easily. However, he is not a successful person now because he always liked to work alone and his company needed him to work in a group to reach the company’s goals.
Also, every person in this world has felt that in the middle of every success, he or she found that they need to obtain more. This feeling of competitiveness is in our soul and it will never stop even if we wanted to suppress that feeling. So, this is something which cannot ignore.
In conclusion, humans have variety of needs that should be satisfied. Learning how to manage our relation and what deeply our soul told us to do is the best way of preparation which anybody must focus to be successful in future life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding others'?
Suggestion: the surrounding others
...e personality earned more respect among the others around them. This attitude indirectly implies that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87564766839 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71122623015 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562176165803 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7088072795 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0526315789 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3157894737 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249591096428 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765784270972 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659543169317 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144608361621 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831585535999 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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