Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The computer was one of the greatest innovation of twenty century which it's effect can be realized in different aspects of human lives. It's one of the major factors that was involved behind of so many world technology and development. I would say that computers have made life easier and more convenient because it helps people in education and business.
First of all, computers made education easier and cheaper. Especially, it helped students through their studying time plus it assisted scientist in analyzing complex data in a very easy way. Furthermore, the student can use the computer for getting information from the internet and researchers can use it for research purpose. For example, when I was at the university, I used to get information from Google and YouTube plus downloading my university textbooks. In addition to that one my friend he is studying his master degree in genetic engineering and he told that he and his professor were using computer for analyzing DNA's chain and computer really helped them.
Secondly, businesses field is assisted my computer. Business people can use the computer to communicate with each other through email and to store their data in the computer. In the past, every office needed paper to write data. When they lost the paper consequently they would lose the whole data, but using computer one can recover the data and it is never lost. For example, my grandfather was a clerk and he said that he was recoding the data in the paper and it was so boring because he was writing everything using pen and paper. On the other hand, one can use the computer to write one whole day work in almost one hour when the computer was not discovered.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the computer actually made our lives easier and more comfortable. the student can get a lot of help from the computer for their studying and researcher can do their research on the computer. Business people also use the computer to connect with their pairs and to store their business data more efficiently and quickly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: CD_NN
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
...ne of the greatest innovation of twenty century which its effect can be realized in dif...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
... our lives easier and more comfortable. the student can get a lot of help from the ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87428571429 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63507890135 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482857142857 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1377035106 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.352941176 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.47058823529 5.45110844103 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21333067138 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846747021651 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103109886196 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149846646272 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053076213115 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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