Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion?
Technology revolution and computers innovation are considered the fourth revolution of human-kind as it completely overwhelms people’s life and changes their habits. Although it can be stressful, I think computers have made life easier and more convenient at different levels that I will develop in the following paragraphs.
The first level corresponds to a personal benefit that computers bring in people’s life. It makes it possible to storage photos, videos, documents and music. Thanks to my computer, I can keep a track of my memories without having to print my photos are the notes I took during class. My computer is the reflect of my life as it allows me to centralize and organize the information I want to keep. If I had to lose my computer or if it was about to break down, I will be devastated because it contains my whole life.
Beyond the individual benefit, there is also a social benefit having a computer. Computers combined with internet makes life easier as it improves our capacity to communicate with others. For example, when I have to work in groups in order to achieve a project, everyone in my group uses his computer and google drive in order to work at the same time on the same google document. Thanks to this technology, everyone can participate and give his opinion. Computer is time-saving, enhance our social interactions by multiplying our communication.
Finally, the third dimension is a universal one: computers enable scientific progress all over the world. Meteorology illustrates perfectly this improvement: on the one hand, scientists can share meteorological information from one place in the word to another one in order to prevent civils from an imminent devastating cyclone. On the other hand, the power of calculation of computers allows to be more accurate on the intensity and the location of the cyclone and therefore alleviate the possible dramatic consequences of the storm.
To conclude, computers enhance life as they bring personal benefit, social advantages and scientific improvements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...tes I took during class. My computer is the reflect of my life as it allows me to centraliz...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, so, therefore, third, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22289156627 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09320778289 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548192771084 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6837766253 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.375 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284004671602 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886751797818 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730285435032 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154017565975 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083268286283 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.