Technology plays an important role in anyone's life. As technology made people's life easier. With the advent in new technology, people are more and more reliant on technology. Some people believe that new technologies are boon for humans, Others believe that they are bay. In my view, Even though technology made people life easier, people feel insecure and stressful due to the
technology for two reasons.
First, Nowadays people are feeling insecure about their jobs due to technology. Some field had eliminated because of some new technology and some are on the verge of elimination. As people are more relying on new gadgets or the invention of technologies. For example, When I was in 5th grade there is one shop near to my house, and one uncle used to sit there at the counter to calculate the sum for the bill and collect the cash. But after one year, one new advance technology RFID had arrived. That is totally automatic and there is no need for an extra person to sit at the counter. So, That uncle is now jobless because of that gadget. This example clearly illustrates that with the advent in technology people are feeling insecure and jobs available in the market are decreasing at a considerable rate.
Second, People are becoming lazy. The new gadgets can do such marvelous things in a fraction of seconds but the same thing takes extra time when it is done by humans. For instance, When I was in 2nd
grade I did not have a calculator and our teacher used to make us remember the tables of 1 to 20. But when I was in 10th one new thing which is called calculator arrived in the market. and students now so much lazy that they even calculate 2+2 in the calculator. After the advent of mobile phones, people used to save mobile numbers rather than remembering it. And when the mobile phone is not working they did not even remember the number. The washing machine is also one example. Women are now just put all the clothes in the machine rather than cleaning it up. This examples clearly shows that
people are becoming lazy and stressful.
In sum, due to technology people do not taking physical or mental pain of working. People are suffering from health problems because of technologies. Their health is not that much good because of not doing physical activities. They are mentally stressed. This reasons clearly indicate that disadvantages of technologies outweigh the advantages. In my opinion, people should
not just rely on technology. At some extent, they should use it and in other places, they have to do their work by their own.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2123.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74944071588 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55105370791 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472035794183 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8961156705 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7666666667 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199390406618 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580653062299 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690539643427 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927576717275 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782442968463 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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