Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Computers became a part of life and each person relay on it for their basic needs. It helps and maintains daily records in many organizations like in hospital, accounting offices, school, universities, shops and industries. Therefore, it is basic need of each person. However, most of the people think that computer makes their lives hard because they need to learn how to operate and how to avoid errors. Some people think that it makes life easier and more convenient, others would disagree. In my opinion, people should use it in their daily routine because it makes their life would be easy and meaningful.
First, computer helps students to get their knowledge and increases information because it helps them to accomplish their task in class efficiently and successfully. Eventually, they will achieve tremendous and secure job in future. For instance, when I was in last year of pharmacy, in Greenwood school, our professor of clinical pharmacy assigned a project in a group. we started research on our project from different source of books in library. We found that all the required information is obsolete and some of them were incorrect. Then, we searched our project on internet through computer, we got all the information easily and all of them are up to date. Ultimately, we got good marks in our project and pass our clinical class with flying color.
Second, with the help of computer we can communicate easily across the world. However, if there are no computer then, it will be very hard to communicate with people of other culture and opinions. Computer also aids in Business like in daily transactions of groceries and in schools, where it can maintain the record of each students. Nowadays, people are moving to western developed countries to get education and they are far away from their families. But, with help of computer, this distance cross in a seconds and people can see and talk to their families easily. For example, I met a foreigner student in my university. I used to see him that during his break time he talked to his family and spend quality time with them.
To sum it up, computer is very beneficial. Although it helped us in so many ways. But, sometime due to some viruses and problem in computer, it gives a very hard time for the people. So, the pros of computer are outweighed than the cons of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 223, Rule ID: IN_PAST
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... will achieve tremendous and secure job in future. For instance, when I was in last year ...
Line 2, column 372, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
...pharmacy assigned a project in a group. we started research on our project from di...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81885856079 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65348389729 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523573200993 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3450374468 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9166666667 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7916666667 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153406407608 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456921656474 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641649639268 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937494672956 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648959239435 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.