Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
technology plays a fundamental part in our lives. Today, we can use technology on almost every aspects of our daily lives and obviously we cannot ignore its influence anymore. One very important technology examples is The internet. Some people believe that the internet has created complex problems because it contains such so much information. While others disagree. In my view, the internet provides us with valuable, trusted information for many reasons.
First, the internet helps consumers to get better items. With the advent of technology, such as cellphones, or laptops., accessing to internet become so popular especially in the part of doing business. For example, Before the I came to the united states, I used to go to shopping malls for purchasing items that I need. Regardless of what the items belong to which category, I sometime bought items that was not good enough to perform or it was too expensive comparing to other items. However, this problem has been solved since I use the internet before making any purchase. If I decide to buy a new laptop, By using the internet I can do many searches to get the information and opinion that help me decide which store offers lower prices, or their product has warranty. As you can, this experience has taught me that the large quantity on the internet help us getting good products instead of being manipulated by sellers.
Second, Technology finds way to make it so convenient to use the internet than in the past. Software companies have innovated search engines that can do multi-options simultaneously. For instance, When I was in the university, I used to do so many researchers and wrote articles. Despite the fact that I was overwhelmed when I started by how much the information that the internet provide to their user, but these difficulties have changed. The internet browser companies have established new search engines that was so easy to adapt and learn to all ages, or whatsoever you need to do. Therefore, I was able to access the information on the internet with typing one or two words in the search engine, and immediately, the information comes up on the screen. Moreover, a lot of these materials can be verified, or identified the source. Without doubts, the information on the internet is so valuable and people can reach out these materials without facing difficulties.
In short, The internet have become a better, valuable source of such a lot of information. But only does it help s us with purchasing suitable products, but the internet search engines have been getting more smarter, so it more convenient. Though there is a lot of not valuable information on the web, We should support these innovations to make our lives less complicated and more relax.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Technology
technology plays a fundamental part in our lives. ...
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Line 1, column 346, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e it contains such so much information. While others disagree. In my view, the intern...
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Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'I'?
Suggestion: the; I
... of doing business. For example, Before the I came to the united states, I used to go...
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Line 3, column 729, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n that help me decide which store offers lower prices, or their product has warra...
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Line 3, column 766, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'warrantied'.
Suggestion: warrantied
...ers lower prices, or their product has warranty. As you can, this experience has taugh...
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Line 3, column 787, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... their product has warranty. As you can, this experience has taught me that the l...
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Line 3, column 867, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to get' or 'get'.
Suggestion: to get; get
... large quantity on the internet help us getting good products instead of being manipula...
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Line 5, column 404, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that the internet provide to their user, but these difficulties have changed. The...
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Line 5, column 657, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ess the information on the internet with typing one or two words in the search en...
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Line 7, column 204, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'smarter' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: smarter
...ternet search engines have been getting more smarter, so it more convenient. Though there i...
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Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing more smarter, so it more convenient. Though there is a lot of not valuable in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, in short, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2314.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06345733042 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04681474988 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516411378556 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 732.6 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2076330426 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.608695652 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8695652174 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5652173913 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299056574974 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826530376471 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571773585146 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182167227786 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395443163823 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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