Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part of every school day. Other people believe that students should spend the whole school day on academic studies. Which opinion do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
School life is important part of every person’s life. As on the basis all the activities should be learned in the school life. So, as per the education, some people believe that In school, students should focused on study whole day. But some people think that in school day, physical exercise also should be the part of it. As my concern, I would like to go with physical exercise should be part of school day. There are some reason as follows.
Preferably, as I have said, physical exercise should part of the school day. because, in my point of view, doing only study whole day may suffer lot of tension of the study to students. In the reaction, students might be get in depression. So, If physical exercise could be the part of some break where students relax there. Student can find some time for another work. If students got bored by only doing study, in physical active they could do some fun, which will make them happy.
Secondly, only doing study, where students don not do the physical things, there they only do mental work. They may cause obesity because of this. So, for that physical exercise is must. Physical exercise not only keeps us physically healthy but it also keeps us mentally healthy. During physical work, stretching of the muscles of our body, it releases some energy by that body get relaxed. So, for that physical exercise is must.
Thirdly, in physical exercise makes student fresh and ardent. So in the exercise yoga could be played nice part, or outdoor sport like hokey, baseball, basket ball, foot ball. As in the suggestion dance also can be the part of it.
In the end, to keep fit students, exercise is important for welfare of the student.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6936026936 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29672083519 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501683501684 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8897734716 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.3636363636 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405275690731 0.236089414692 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133323852208 0.076458572812 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111475130444 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21599193017 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163493507496 0.0645574589148 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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