Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part of every school day. Other people believe that students should spend the whole school day on academic studies.
The main purpose of students from attending school is to earn required knowledge to become expertise in their desirable majors. The performance of students depends on many things such as their mental condition, the amount of time they spend on studying, and so on. Some people argue that students should just focus on their studied, while others believe that physical exercise should be a required part of every school day. Personally, I believe that physical exercise would benefits students in different ways.
To begin with, physical exercise regulate blood pressure and heartbeat and strengthen their bodies. To have a healthy body, students should exercise regularly which immune them against many of diseases. Playing games such football, handball, basketball help to burn extra calories and to control the body weight, which usually leads to many health problems. A balanced body allows one to have a balanced mind. The mind runs fresh only if the body supports it. Regular exercise improve the development of nerves in their brains that increases their performance.
Additionally, the school life is stressful. Students should take many courses in schools and accordingly they have to do a huge number of assignment for those courses that puts them under a heavy pressure. Students always need a break from their tedious lectures, and exercise can provide it in the best way. Physical exercise give them the opportunity to make a relaxation and release their stresses. Spending a little time on exercise would be a relief for students as they can focus on something except their assignment and spend a funny time with their friends.
In conclusion, having a regular exercise plan benefits students physically and mentally. Physical exercise not only regulate the organs of students' bodies, but also give them the opportunity to make a relaxation. Students who have a healthy body and free mind would have a better performance.
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... spend a funny time with their friends. In conclusion, having a regular exercise...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, so, then, while, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23794212219 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66331126803 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533762057878 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1782493163 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2777777778 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304285325759 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968633077708 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134001051321 0.0737576698707 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19553631658 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147284183246 0.0645574589148 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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