Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?
When we hear the term "Beg", the first thing that comes to our mind is that it is something related to help. There are many honest people who tries to help out someone in need. However, are many logical and probable reasons to support why begging should not be engenered.
First of all, begging shows an easy way to make money. People, mostly underpriveleged people, find it easy to mak ore money through begging as they do nt have to look for work or need to utilize any of their energy. Begging also makes a person lethergy. For example, a person who does not have the sufficient qualification for a job or finding hard to get a job, would find begging an easier way to make money for himself/heself.
Secondly, begging leads to child trafficking and also human trafficking. Many adults and children, mostly girls, who are unaware of the ralities of the city life, are brought from village and sold off or kept for begging. For instance, in India, agents who work for this kind of trafficking, lure families and children, showing them how easily they can make money in cities. Moreover, when the children are brought to the city, they start to realize the trap they fell into. Some of them are also intentionally made handi-caped so that people have pity on them and give more money.
Furthermore, begging can also lead to nuisance in city. As explained earlier how people find it an easy way to make money, people from the village get more encouraged and start to settle in the cities as they realize that it is easy to earn more through begging in big cities. This leads to overpopulation in cities, hence creates a tumult in everyone's lifestyle.
However, some might argue that begging might help people who are in need, but there are more warranted easons why begging should not be encouraged. People should help others who are in need, but there are also frauds who fabricates their needs and trap people into believing what is not true. Hence, according to me, people should stop helping beggers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6918767507 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39018148682 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515406162465 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7071432386 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0555555556 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61111111111 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139683450103 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436038258605 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377454011649 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076525375842 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269116033654 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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