Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?
Money is probably one of the major factors which motivates people to get up everyday and reach their jobs on time. While there are other factors such as passion and sincerety, we can't neglect the role of money in any individual's life. Primarily, money is needed for buying the basic needs such as food, shelter, clothes and even palatable water and hence one can't live without decent daily wages. But some people just try to earn money by wandering in the streets and begging. In my opinion, begging hinders the beggar's personal growth as well as acts as an easy means to take away other individuals' hard earned money, and therefore, giving money to beggars should be avoided.
To start with, providing money to beggars will encourage them further to just sit at a place and earn money. There are various instances which illustrate that the people begging for money are not poor or in dire need of money. There was a case of a woman living in a metropolitan city in India who used to beg at a temple. Due to suspicion, when the police followed her home and raided it, they found bundles of notes in her bed's mattress and cupboards. These beggars not only take other's hard earned money but also live a life full of luxuries and comfort.
Moreover, galvanizing the culture of earning money by begging promotes child trafficking. Children are being kidnapped and are forced to beg on streets and near multiplex complexes. This practice continues as people are more succeptible to give money to hungry children than adults. There has been an incident where a child got kidnapped and could not be traced by the police. One day, while coming out of a store from the mall, the mother saw her child in arms of a dirty looking man begging for money. When she asked the man about the child, he just started shouting at her. After great effort by the police, the beggar finally agreed of kidnapping the child.
Additionally, as begging at different areas at different times of the day yeilds enough money, the beggars don't try to learn something new or polish their existing skills so as to use those to earn money truthfully. Beggars don't even try for a position at various new jobs created by new companies and start-ups. They see begging as an easy way out for their daily bread and butter. For instance, when a beggar was interviewed by a TV reporter, he merrily said that why should he use his BTech degree and work hard to earn Rs. 20000 per month when he easily makes Rs. 15000 per month just by begging.
All in all, the practice of begging should be strictly prohibitted due to the aforementioned reasons and instead rigorous training to gain and polish new skills must be encouraged.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...actors which motivates people to get up everyday and reach their jobs on time. While the...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ctors such as passion and sincerety, we cant neglect the role of money in any indivi...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...e cant neglect the role of money in any individuals life. Primarily, money is needed for bu...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... and even palatable water and hence one cant live without decent daily wages. But so...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...he day yeilds enough money, the beggars dont try to learn something new or polish th...
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Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ing new or polish their existing skills so as to use those to earn money truthfully. Beg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2221.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66596638655 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41893040686 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542016806723 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9895977561 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.954545455 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.59090909091 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225818784582 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731623100664 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588697954234 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122908637809 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783507448715 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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