Some people think that automobile has improved modern life. Other think that automobile has caused serious problems. What is your opinion?
Believe or not, automobile is the most important signs of modern life. Although, some people claim that automobiles has bring out some problems like traffic jam or pollution, but, in my vantage point, automobiles are inseparable component of our lives. Automobiles has improve convenience, simplify traveling and accelerate daily works. In the following these reasons will be explained more.
Todays, with new technological advances and high tech style of the life, automobiles are not only improve our life, but also, there are the necessities of modernization. In the morning, many people can travel to their work from far distances. They don’t need to live just near their work place. Therefore, the possibility of working with much more chances is provided.
These days, people can travel by their automobile. In recent years, traveling by private cars has increased. People can go out when ever and where ever they want. The speed and luxury structure of new cars has motivated people to travel far away. Traveling, as many experts say, improve the economic situation of cities or countries and it provides job opportunities.
Automobiles has accelerate daily work. This command is not an exaggeration. With cities expansion and increase of relation between cities, automobile plays an important role in accelerating these cases. In the past, without new cars, people had to travel at least one or two days before in order to get on time. But, due to high tech automobiles and also high speed public transportations, the possibilities of traveling in few intervals is provided. Furthermore, in emergency situations, for example when somebody needs to go to hospitals, it is not necessary to wait a lot. Few minutes is enough to get to the hospitals.
To sum up, although we all know that each technology has its own destructive effects, but in the case of automobiles, the advantages is more than its disadvantages. Automobile has dependent us to themselves. People rarely walk to work and this results fatness. They pollute the air and also increase noise pollution. But, in my opinion, all these effects can be vanished by some basic measurements, for instance, to decrease the pollution, countries are now, try to expand the use of electric vehicle or air filters in the exhausts. The important point is the optimal and proper use of cars. All things can be harmful even an apple, when you use it in an inappropriate way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
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Message: Use past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
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Message: Use past participle here: 'accelerated'.
Suggestion: accelerated
...des job opportunities. Automobiles has accelerate daily work. This command is not an exag...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an inappropriate way" with adverb for "inappropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... harmful even an apple, when you use it in an inappropriate way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, at least, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1025 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97598618108 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.240509703 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5925925926 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8148148148 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85185185185 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192431625838 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500202387495 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601438447429 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115225979578 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750260011024 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.