Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
I was born in a small town but I graduated from a famous university in a big city, so I prefer to live there. Living in a big city has some advantages that I will explain some of them, below.
First, there are many job opportunities that people can have. Many big factories, offices, companies or even big stores are in big cities. You have a lot of choices to select. More over, the salaries are more and thus you can promote sooner.
Second, education is developed and children can use different advanced educational facilities. There are a lot of education centers, big schools and different kind of classes that people can take advantage and thus they can enter big universities. Also access to different kind of classes is easy and people are able to entertain themselves by art classes, English classes and so on.
Another reason to live in a big city is the variety of facilities. Big theaters, cinemas with different movies are located in big cities. Huge parks, shopping malls, zoos, amusement parks and playing centers are provided for people in big cities. Museums, clothes mesons and many spectacular places are provided. Also there are metros, buses and taxis all over a city that you can get everywhere whenever you want. Many beautiful apartment are made in big cities. There for when you want to build apartment or even hire a house, you have a lot of choices.
In total, I should say that living in a big city is interesting and convenient and I never want to live in small towns again.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...d thus they can enter big universities. Also access to different kind of classes is ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...d many spectacular places are provided. Also there are metros, buses and taxis all o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, thus, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 266.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67669172932 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59072476829 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.496922529 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1764705882 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6470588235 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76470588235 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271723273595 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858846005142 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836498702527 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171767704576 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107708549429 0.0645574589148 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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