tpo 37
One of the threats to endangered sea turtle species is the use of nets by commercial shrimp-fishing boats. When turtles get accidentally caught in the nets, they cannot rise to the surface of the ocean to breathe, and they die. Some people suggest that this problem can be solved through an invention called a turtle excluder device (TED) that is incorporated into the nets. A TED provides a passage through which the turtles can escape. However, TEDs have been criticized for several reasons.
The passage talks about a device called ted that is used to save turtles that are trapped in nets. The writer explains three disadvantages of using teds. On the other hand, the lecture disproves the writer’s claims. The speaker reckons that teds are effective way of protecting turtles’ population and responds writer's points.
Firstly, in the passage the writer believes that the number of turtles that are get trapped are only rarely and thus using teds is not effective. On the contrary, the lecturer pointed out that there are thousands of shrimper in the sea if each shrimper caught one turtles each year, the result is thousands of turtles that are caught each year. Considering the small number of them because of the endangered population, this number will effects them greatly
Secondly, the writer proposes time limiting method for saving turtles. But, the writer rebuts this response. The writer believes that time limit is not a good idea. The government can’t">can’t handle it in a vast area and it is not controllable, therefore it can’t">can’t be enforced.
Finally, the writer reckons that teds are so small for some turtles. some large ones can not escape from the nets. The lecturer have a solution. She demonstrates that teds designs can be modified. it is possible for designers to provide large teds and thus no problem would be exist for some large turtles.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one turtle', 'a turtle', or simply 'turtles'?
Suggestion: one turtle; a turtle; turtles
...mper in the sea if each shrimper caught one turtles each year, the result is thousands of t...
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Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'effect'
Suggestion: effect
...endangered population, this number will effects them greatly Secondly, the writer ...
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Line 13, column 70, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...hat teds are so small for some turtles. some large ones can not escape from the nets...
^^^^
Line 13, column 129, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... not escape from the nets. The lecturer have a solution. She demonstrates that teds ...
^^^^
Line 13, column 198, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ates that teds designs can be modified. it is possible for designers to provide la...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 231.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22510822511 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2850440487 2.5805825403 127% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532467532468 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 419.366225166 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.0813212596 49.2860985944 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4666666667 110.228320801 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 21.698381199 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06452816374 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105503285165 0.272083759551 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375174239646 0.0996497079465 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424800373225 0.0662205650399 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683920384657 0.162205337803 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517603434536 0.0443174109184 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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