It is more important to work at a job that you enjoy, even if the salary is low, than it is to have a high-paying job that you do not enjoy.
One of the most important part of any job is the money that you earned. If, even the job is enjoyable for you, but the money is not enough, you will get disappointed from your work and your efficiency will decrease. However, in my point of view, enjoy and favor of the job is very crucial. Having a job with a lot of money will annoy you gradually and makes you unhappy. In what follows, I’ll elaborate my view point.
People spend at least 8 hours a day for working in offices, stores, corporations or others. Doing a job for many years leads to make them unhappy and in most cases old. But when they enjoy their job, the hours won’t be exhausting. After the work, if it is enjoyable, the man and the woman feel satisfied and has the enthusiasm to do it again.
The second reason of my idea is that if a person like his job, he will make it unborn. Using new ideas, progress and innovation are some of the result of enjoyable job. In many jobs, if you have innovations or doing something different from your opponents, you will become successful and the simplest result is earning more money. This circulation is continuous, earning more money increase your favor and this will improve your excitement for doing the best.
The last but not the least important reason is that doing a job that is earns much money without sentiment, makes people stimulus gradually. It effects on their health and after a while they can’t use their money in a right way and enjoy from earning it.
By and large, earning a lot of job is something ideal, but doing a favorite job is the goal of anybody and I can postulate that enthusiasm is the motivation of earning much more money of the job. Working with enthusiasm make people happy and healthy and help them to spend off-work hours a day more useful. Disappointment is the most important result of doing a job that is just earned much money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... new ideas, progress and innovation are some of the result of enjoyable job. In many jobs, ...
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Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...a while they can't use their money in a right way and enjoy from earning it. By and larg...
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Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun job seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of jobs'.
Suggestion: a lot of jobs
...from earning it. By and large, earning a lot of job is something ideal, but doing a favorit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, thus, while, at least, by and large, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52034883721 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46838959672 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482558139535 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5793995185 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3888888889 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376755244895 0.236089414692 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127756125441 0.076458572812 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071383432715 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216776427406 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773330578289 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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