Some people think the media including newspapers, televisions, radio and internet sources are less concerned with the accuracy of news. They think the information from the media is becoming incorrect. Do you agree with this opinion or not and explain why？ Include examples and specific reasons.
One of the biggest changes in the modern world is the wide accessibility to get information through a variety of media including newspapers, television, and the Internet. Every day we have been bombarded with a great amount of news that has a great influence on our lives. Therefore, the accuracy of news is really important for us. While some people cast doubt on the accuracy of the news from the different media, I personally believe most of the news that is released by the media is accurate. In the following paragraph, I will explore the reasons for my viewpoint.
The first reason to be mentioned is that the convenient access of people to different news resources has made the media do their job accurately. People usually follow news from different channels, so when they hear new headline news, they would definitely try to find out more about this news from other channels as well. Thus, it would be really easy for them to realize the fake news. For instance, in contrast to recent years, there was a limited number of channels to get the news they believed whatever the television channels had spread. People revolutionized due to the fake news they received.
The second reason is that the media would not jeopardize their reputation and current income by distributing inaccurate news. Nowadays, the media try to expand their followers to increase their revenue through commercial advertisements in competition with their rivals. If they spread the fake news, their followers would finally be informed and follow the news elsewhere. As a result, their income would dramatically decrease. For example, one of the local channels in my hometown closed last year by a court decision. This channel accused many famous people in the town of corruption, as it could not prove the accusations in the court, the jury sentenced it by closing the channel to prevent from disgracing people prestigious.
In conclusion, I firmly believe the news that is broadcast by the media nowadays is accurate as people have access to the different sources of news to check what they have just heard. Also, for protecting their reputation and money resources, the media has no choice but to do their work inaccurate way, otherwise, they would lose their customers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, really, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99204244032 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74691968555 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.61695203 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.555555556 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9444444444 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05555555556 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246084196893 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810174285022 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558666471907 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165771254534 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407374905135 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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