Which one do you prefer? Why?
1) a company offering you a job with a challenging and interesting projects but fewer vacation days or
2) another company offering you a job that is not so challenging and interesting but has more vacation days.
Choosing a job is one of the most important issues in everyone’s life. There are different factors into consideration for my favorite job like whether this is a well-paid job or whether my job related to my talent and my academic degree and so on. However, among two options that the question suggests, I definitely, prefer to choose the challenging and interesting job even with less vacation. In the following paragraph, I will shed light on the arguments to support my view.
The first point to be mentioned is that I have a tendency to live a good life. I could not lead a good life as long as I am doing an uninteresting job. As you know, all of us, spend the majority of our time at the workplace, therefore, if our work is tedious, without any doubt, this condition makes us depressed and helpless. Nowadays, scientist proved that there is a direct correlation between doing an interesting job and psychological health. Furthermore, challenging makes sure us, we never exhausted with our work. Due to this vital role that favorite job has, many psychologists advise people to choose their future job according to their personal taste, not other’s opinion. For instance, some parents get involved in their children career. They try to impose their opinion without considering their children’s satisfaction. As a result, many young people suffer from psychological pains that related to wasting their life in unpleasant and boring careers.
In approaching this issue, apart from the point that stated above, another reason that deserves some words is that challenging and pleasant job assist us to make more money. When doing an interesting job, we would be more energetic and productive in our workplace. Therefore, we work for a few hours without getting tired and our productivity increase significantly. All of these, help us become a productive employee and distinguish ourselves compare to our colleagues who chose their job just for making money to meet their family demands. Our manager supervises our work, hence we would get a promotion that leads to getting a high salary. Furthermore, when we have a high income, it gets us a chance to have a luxurious trip even though its duration is short. And personally, I prefer not to sacrifice the quality of vacation for its duration.
By the way of conclusion, based on the arguments above, I am of the opinion that interesting and challenging career even with less vacation far outweigh uninteresting job with more vacation days because it provides us an opportunity to enjoy every moment of our lives and also, we can get paid high remuneration and luxurious short vacation in a year.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd luxurious short vacation in a year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, you know, as a result, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2224.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99775280899 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.987888695 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541573033708 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3256708576 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.904761905 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1904761905 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214503687201 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609572558379 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609044874522 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142736965942 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405877451157 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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