Some people think the media including newspapers, televisions, radio and internet sources are less concerned with the accuracy of news. They think the information from the media is becoming incorrect. Do you agree with this opinion or not and explain why？ Include examples and specific reasons.
From the past, till now the media are becoming one of the important parts of humans’ daily life. They have received the freshest news from them and always believe them due to the fact that the media are controlled by the government and people trust their authorities. But now the situation is different and the approaches of government alter; in addition, the level of society’s stress increases so that they tend to hear good and hopeful news instead of bad and stressful news. In my perspective, recently the media are going to change the information of news due to the reasons which I expand on in the following paragraphs.
The first and foremost notion that I state is, one of the aims of the media is keeping the reputation of the government so they try focusing on good news and decreasing the level of stress of bad news by the means of changing them; in addition, they endeavor to depict the bad situation of other countries to increase the level of popularity of the government; therefore, people eager to watch, hear or read the news because they will reduce their level of anxiety. For instance, in my country’s news, they just focus on other countries' bad situation and picture that other countries are on bad occasions and the situation of our country is very good and hopeful. Besides, about the news of our country, they just state the good ones to increase government popularity among society.
The latter reason that I assert is, in our hectic lives that we face lots of stressful situations every day, society psychologists believe that it is better to change the news, in order to not make the extra pressures on peoples' mind. About a year ago a proposal released that one of the goals of the news should be reducing the anxiety of people, the writer believed that if the level of stress of society increases the number of criminal acts will increase too. To cope with this problem, just for the safety of society the media have started revealing inaccurate news. And it is true that the truthfulness of news decrease within the last years.
To make the long story short, as I write above, inevitably governments start to make changes to the media and legislate laws about the alteration of news, in order to protect society. Besides, to elevate the level of population of governments it is a wise decision for both people and governments.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73607748184 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60609186137 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462469733656 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.94265232975 283% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.1658454051 48.9658058833 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.461538462 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7692307692 20.6045352989 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157671428414 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670901431461 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424939780808 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10287481972 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402871610502 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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