Some people think the media including newspapers, televisions,radio, and internet sourcesare less concerned with the accuracy of the news. some people think the information from the media are becoming incorrect . Do you agree with this opinion or not and explain whyHInclude examples and specific reasons.
Today with the galloping growth of technology, no one can turn a blind eye to the significant influences of various media such as televisions, radio and internet sources on people’s awareness. Some are inclined toward the opinion that media such as newspapers, televisions, and etc. don't try hard to assess the correctness of information and news before broadcasting them, on the other extreme of the rope, others think that these media publish confident and accurate news. While both sides take their own positions, I think the latter group carries more weight. In the following paragraph, I will explain some strong reasons to support my belief.
As the first and paramount reason, governments and some international organizations always legislate to control the accuracy of the information and not to allow media to publish fake and fallacious news. These strict laws force media to assess information and various news before publishing them. In other words, if these news sources publish fake news intentionally or inadvertently, they will be penalized and their reputation will be ruined. For instance, some master students conduct a survey of people in a city in order to find out their opinion about the accuracy of news that is read from the media. They believed that different news networks especially those are established in their countries such as televisions and internet sources are completely reliable. They explained that the government of their country has employed several media experts in different parts of offices in order to analyze and evaluate information and news before they will be published. In addition, these experts penalize the media that publish fake news; thus, networks and news websites’ managers put a lot of effort to broadcast properly and efficiently.
Second, nowadays there are numerous sources of news such as BBC channel and different websites that have many followers who can watch and read different news; thus, they can distinguish fake news from accurate news. Consequently, media such as televisions and newspapers try hard to publish reliable and accurate news in order to don't lose their followers and customers’ loyalty. For example, about two years ago, when I was a student, I was following a news website for a month which had various advertisement pages and a million followers. This website not only didn't evaluate the correctness of information and news, but also, they created a break, fake, and interesting news about celebrities and published them in order to attract more followers. After two months, many followers those read and followed other media such as newspapers left that because they found that this website broadcasts deceptive and unreliable news. Therefore, in today's competitive market, various news channels definitely consider the authenticity of information and news in order to don't lose their followers.
In conclusion, the media such as televisions, radio, and internet are reliable sources of news due to restricting laws that are made by government and organizations in order to prevent the broadcasting of fake news and information. Moreover, various news websites and newspapers don’t want to lose their followers and customers because of publishing fallacious news. Hence, they always consider the correctness of the news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 34.0 13.8261648746 246% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2811.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 522.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38505747126 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96472077873 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454022988506 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 864.0 618.680645161 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1876999012 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.857142857 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.45110844103 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27299119626 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970905005622 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572024337223 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196683742807 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700514358265 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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