Some people think that scientists make the most important contributions to society. Other people think that the contributions of artists are the most important. Which position do you agree with? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Our society has tremendous leverage on our quotidian routine life. It influence in a direct and intangible way.It has indelible impact on person's ideology, life pattern, and perspectives. Although some people hold the viewpoint that all scale of people effect the society equally. However, others hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. My personal and actual observation of life which has led me to agree with the idea that scientists are the most effective type of people rather than others like artists. In the following essay I shall delve into most outstanding reasons.
To commence with, scientist contribution may save people's lives which is the most valuable things. In our era, people are fighting a different ,new invented diseases and some even not found treatment to them. Scientists are play a pivotal role in our society which we should valued and appreciate. For instance, before it was hard to diagnose diseases without x-ray, Rengton, the scientist who invent it, made huge changes in the society and people life standard, welfare, and quality. At the same time, although people was enjoying artistic shows. It was not came in priority for the individuals as they could not enjoy it with unhealthy condition for the society's individuals.
In addition, scientist are consider the important segment of the society since their research helps share scale of people in a variety of subjects. Technology, medical, and educational, and even arts. Many scientific researches have been done to enhance the person's life pattern so all could live happily. For example, the invention of the newly and electronic Guitar which makes the tone and fetch much better and more nicer, enjoyable music that the people can enjoy listening more. Furthermore, the invention of modern technology by the scientists make the life difficulties easy to handle. Indeed, researches in all aspects of the society by the scientists are still in continuous mode till our day and supported by all people and countries governments. In view of the fact that unless the importance of the scientists role in the society, it had not supported globally.
To sum up, after contemplating the reasons which I had mentioned before, taking all the factors into consideration, I would reinforce my idea that scientists are more important playing role in the society than artists because of their goal in saving people's lives and wide researches in all type of sience that people in deep need to them. Accordingly, I believe it is most important to appreciate and respect their roles by making a celebration day specific for all the scientist and their beneficial role in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2246.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15137614679 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77079788736 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534403669725 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 696.6 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7453551415 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.952380952 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7619047619 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.19047619048 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276373256467 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816980635615 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672848186867 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172372430976 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154531423474 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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