Some people think that scientists make the most important contributions to society. Other people think that the contributions of artists are the most important. Which position do you agree with? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I have a firm opinion that scientists make the most significant contributions to the society and have been doing so for over a period of more than hundred years. Scientists have made human lives much more easier and simpler in my opinion. I believe this for two main reasons which will be reflected in my essay.
Firstly, scientists have the toughest jobs to deal with projects or formulate products which need to have a positive impact and have useful applications. Scientists have to do many iterations of experiment and not give up at any stage, to come up with the right technique to solve problems of the society. To be specific, the earth is in dire state due to the adverse effects of climate change because of reliance on fossil fuels for fuel and energy generation. The problem has persisted for a long time now with no possible solution. Scientists offered a solution for this issue by inventing the technology of electric vehicles. Electric vehicles are enviromantal friendly and consume renewable sources of energy for fuel. This discovery by scientists has impacted humanity and transformed their lives and given them a new hope for pollution free earth.
Secondly, scientists have to predict changes that could occur in the future and be future ready by developing products that are relevant.
Scientists have to be very skilled and technically sound to make such decisions and this inspires people to do more research. Thus, they motivate the future generation to strive and achieve more complex goals. This kind of inspiration from artists is not possible since artists contributions are limited to arts and cannot impact as many people as scientists. For instance, the Indian Space Research facility was always seen as a tyro in its field. However it was the dedication of countless scientist which made it possible for a developing country such as India to launch satellites and rockets in space almost at one-eight of the price of a developed country. This accomplishment has made every Indian proud and instill confidence and lots of inspiration.
Therefore, I believe that scientists contribution to the society are much more important than the artists. Scientists have always played a pivotal and crucial lives by inventing and discovering things which can change the lives of the people and in the process, motivating people to achieve even greater accomplishments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...doing so for over a period of more than hundred years. Scientists have made human lives...
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...was always seen as a tyro in its field. However it was the dedication of countless scie...
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...ill confidence and lots of inspiration. Therefore, I believe that scientists con...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'scientists'' or 'scientist's'?
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...o achieve even greater accomplishments.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2075.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29336734694 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8536683958 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545918367347 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4776949779 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.210526316 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6315789474 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184263841615 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550635091722 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567465603583 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10558329156 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570821688153 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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