Some people think that success is most important in
their life. Others think that it’s more important to be
happy when they fail. Which idea do you agree with
and why?
In this day and age of modernization, define goals in life is of the substantial prerequisites of having a wonderful one. In this vein, an overwhelming majority of people believe that being successful is the main objective of life. Meanwhile, others holding different viewpoint state that being happy when they fail is the utmost goal in life. I, personally, utterly agree with the latter group for two substantial reasons, on which I will elaborate in the following essay.
To begin with, being able to feel happiness in drawbacks, people can augment the probability of their triumph in life. To be more specific, success is about making good decisions in life which consists of wins and losses. In this regard, provided someone cannot see the bright side during harsh times, he or she cannot select the right path in life and aggravate the situation consequently. Under such circumstance, that person is a far cry from success, so it demonstrates the importance of being exhilarated in failure owing to the fact that making reasonable decisions needs calmness of mind and have comprehensive understanding about the situation that cannot be achieved without happiness. As a result, be being happy in failure, humans can sow the seeds of success within themselves years down the road.
Another noteworthy point is that embracing happiness in harsh conditions is synonymous with being immune to many mental and physical diseases. To put it in a more vivid picture, in order to achieve success, one must experience many failures, so a big portion of humans' life is allocated to time that they fail. In this spirit, research after research reveal the detrimental influence of stress in individuals’ body and mind. In this line of thoughts, if someone cannot be happy in harsh time, he or she will be exposed to huge amount of stress in life, which puts the life in jeopardy. On the other hand, finding a way to be exhilarated in drawbacks, mankind can have a prolonged life teemed with enjoyment experiences. As a result, people must prioritize happiness in harsh conditions over achieving success in their lifetime.
In conclusion, people must be happy when they fail because not only that assist them to become successful in their life but also it alleviates mental and physical disorders which seems promising.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, while, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06788511749 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86676463633 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545691906005 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7209849552 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.3125 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9375 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332015489547 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112914493259 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644379516248 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21833907433 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138887863458 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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