Some people think that success is most important in their life. Others think that it’s more important to be happy when they fail. Which idea do you agree with and why?

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Some people think that success is most important in their life. Others think that it’s more important to be happy when they fail. Which idea do you agree with and why?

Since man has been living in this universe, people wonder whether being happy when they fail is more important in their life or success. In my opinion, being happy when you fail in a project is more important because it helps you to get relax in the time of failure. Moreover, it will push you forward that finally leads you to success. I will illustrate my reasons in the following paragraphs.

First, being happy when you fail in a project helps you to get relax. Indeed, no success will not happen without any failure; for sure, every human has some failure time in his life. Thus, they become upset because they spend a lot of time and energy to become successful but they didn’t. Therefore, it will affect other parts of people’s life. For instance, when I was doing my master's project at university, every time that I broke, I became upset because I had spent a lot of time, energy and money but I couldn’t become successful. As a result, it affected all other aspects of my life; for example, I got angry by every fault of others. Consequently, it caused more problems in my relationships with others such as my friends and my family that made me even more upset. Hence, being happy helps you to release your mind.

Second, being happy in times of defeat force you to try once more. Indeed, failure is one part of every project, thus, if people become disappointed every time they failed, they don’t try more to become successful. For example, Issac Newton had almost 2000 crashes through his project to invent a lamp. Imagine if he became disappointed after each defeat; thus, we might not be as developed as today. In fact, according to him, he became happy after each failure because he could have found another way that didn't end to succuss. Therefore, this helped him to try another time and become successful eventually.

Based on the aforementioned reasons, it can be concluded that being happy in a time of failure is more important than being successful.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73850574713 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5826923757 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514367816092 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3619712744 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7894736842 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3157894737 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57894736842 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315932601937 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10737802405 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877565840433 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216999561303 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871661691779 0.0645574589148 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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