Some people think that success is the most important in their life. Others think that it’s more important to be happy when they fail. Which idea do you agree with and why?
Successfulness and happiness are among the most important goals which humankind was searching for them from their existence on the Earth up to now. When it comes to the question which one is the most important one, different people adopt different attitudes toward this question depending on their characters and educational backgrounds. On the one hand, there are people who adhere to the belief that happiness is key for having good life; on the other hand, others believe that successfulness brings about happiness since these are interrelated. As far as I am personally concerned, the latter carries further weight not only does the happiness comes from our successfulness but also does help people to plan to accomplish greater success in their life.
The meaning of success varies from person to person depending on their characters, skills, talents and needs. Although, it has different meanings, people will be happy when they achieve a success even if it is the smallest one which they could achieve. For instance, a shopkeeper will be happy when he sells more, a doctor will have a sense of satisfaction when he becomes well-known among the community of doctors or an architecture will become more self-confidence when he constructs one of the most important monument in his country. In fact, successfulness is a key for being happy and dispel of uncomfortable feelings. Therefore, since happiness comes from becoming successful, it is the most important in people’s life.
Moreover, the successfulness is the key to obtain other important goals and valuable assets. As long as people achieve success, they become happy, receive positive energy and plan to achieve next success. I think the epitome of successive success happen in students’ life when students passed their courses and receive A in all courses and graduate from the university, they become confident and happy and plan to obtain next certification. Therefore, someday, it ends up that they are a professor at one of prestigious university and earning high salary. Therefore, successfulness not only does it help people to be happy but also does it a so much promising step toward a plethora of success waiting for them.
Taken together, the success is the most important in people’s life since it is essential to achieve other valuable assets. I believe people will learn valuable lessons from when they fail but the success plays the major role in people’s life and they will never experience an ideal life till they achieve success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ther weight not only does the happiness comes from our successfulness but also does h...
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...n ideal life till they achieve success.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2132.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98235540864 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463414634146 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7909042766 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.25 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406338703582 0.236089414692 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148831197759 0.076458572812 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062375546753 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274015698704 0.150856017488 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183697167773 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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