Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to have rules about the types of clothes that people wear in their workplace and at school.
Wearing clothes has been one of basic need of humankind from their first existence on the Earth till now. People typically wear different clothes depending on their personalities, characters, needs and occasions. Therefore, the question whether people should follow rules about the types of clothes wearing in their workplace and school has long been a topic of controversy among students, employees and different circles. On the one hand, there are people who believe that obeying rules about how to dress, assist people to save their time and focus further on their work and study; on the other hand, others believe that being free to wear what they really want to wear has outstanding merits. As far as I am personally concerned, the latter carries further weight since not only does it greatly assist people to discover others’ personalities but also does it aid people to refresh themselves and their life by having new appearance.
Wearing clothes typically indicate peoples’ personalities in different ways. The most important aspect of clothes which can be considered as a way to discover people’s personalities is color. In fact, different colors evoke different memories and feelings. As a matter of fact, people who always interested in dressing clothes with vibrant colors such as orange, red and yellow are energetic person or those who like to wear cool colors such as sky blue or bright green are a good indicative of people who search for calm and peaceful life. Moreover, people can judge their friends and relatives by observing how they wear clothes and how much they are cautious regarding cleanliness and neatness of their clothes. For instance, people, who iron their clothes every day before going to work or school and wash them after two or three days, are usually a neat person in other aspects of their life or people who put on strange and fashionable clothes, are usually people who intrigue to experience novelty and attract others ‘attention. Subsequently, if strict rules apply to how people should wear clothes, it will deprive people of reflecting their personalities and distinguishing themselves from others.
What’s more, changing clothes may aid people to have more pleasant life in different ways. In fact, people, particularly students and workers, usually do the same job during the day and have a routing life. Therefore, putting on the same clothes such as uniform will add more sense of repetition in their life. Then, they can inject the sense of novelty into their life by wearing different clothes with different colors. On the other hand, such routine life with high pressure on workplace typically result in depression or frustration after short period. Therefore, they can overcome such problems by changing their clothes and produce a sense of happiness even if it is temporarily. To me personally, the color of clothes which I wear has a profound influence on my mood during the day and the day I wear bright and strong color, I am full of energy and have a good sense about my life. Consequently, freely wearing clothes allow people to avoid constant repetition exist in their life.
To wrap it up, applying tight rules on the way which people wear clothe not only does it deprive people of reflecting their personalities by wearing different clothes but does it make employees’ and students’ life more routine making them depressed. I believe that the world is beautiful due to differences between people, even if they are superficial, not similarities since we learn much from finding the differences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
...acters, needs and occasions. Therefore, the question whether people should follow rules about the ty...
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Line 3, column 974, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'peopled'.
Suggestion: peopled
...ge and fashionable clothes, are usually people who intrigue to experience novelty and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, really, regarding, so, then, therefore, for instance, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 13.8261648746 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3017.0 1977.66487455 153% => OK
No of words: 586.0 407.700716846 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14846416382 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92010537223 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81751777066 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459044368601 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 918.9 618.680645161 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.9017367635 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.136363636 100.406767564 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31818181818 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320019271008 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111096718624 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063629595395 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211425420835 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625726315279 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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