Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Living in large cities, people typically acquaint with different people with spread spectrum of characters and personalities. Then, they may become closer together and establish a long-term friendship in future. Therefore, the question whether the ability to maintain friednship with the smaller number of people over long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily, has long been a topic of controversy among people and different circels. on the one hand, there are people who adhere to the believe that making new friend is more important since it allows people to receive more help when they encounter a difficulty in their lives from their friends; on the other hand, others believe that maintaining friendship has outstanding merits. As far as I am personally concerned, the latter carries further weight since not only does it allow our friends to discover our characters and personalities more but also is making new relationship is risky and tiem-consuming in such modern day.
Maintaining a relationship for long time will assist people to establish a closer relationship. In fact, having smaller friends will provide people an opportunity to spend more time with them, as a result of which they will be able to greatly discover the characteristics and personalities of their friends. As long as people know much about their friends, they can make them more happy by doing an act which they really like or helping them when they face a severe problem in their lievs. For instance, I am firend with my classmate for 12 years from my childhood, so I know what he really likes, what makes him angry, what he does whan he is nervous and so forth. Therefore, I have happy moments with him since we both know each other and strive to behave in a way that do not destroy our friendship. Subsequently, maintaining relationship for long time bring about more happiness.
Making new friend is very risky and time-taking nowadyas. In fact, people are involved in their daily life which they have not enough time even to spend with their old friend. While making new friends means that they should spend time in order to hang out with them to cement their relationship and if they do not, they will lose their new relationship. For instance, when I was studying abroad I acquainted several intelligent and well-educated person which I really liked to become friend with them but I was overwhelmed with my research and I do not have time to spend with them, as a result of which I could not become friend with them even if I have been there for four years. Furthermore, people nowadays are very different from people twenty years ago. In fact, there are people who establish a friendship so as to achieve their objective not for the sake of freindship itself. Consequently, making new friend will not gaurantee that we will have more happy time with them.
To wrap it up, maintaining an old relationship is more advantageous since no only does it provide people an opportunity to become closer to their friends but also is making new friend very time-taking and sometimes bring about more difficulties. So I prefer to spend my time with my old friends instead of making new friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2690.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 551.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88203266788 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84493438435 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75438589848 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.417422867514 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 814.5 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.2542677993 48.9658058833 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.55 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367457899208 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134916577081 0.076458572812 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942114513947 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254500280151 0.150856017488 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737515071392 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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