Some people think that travelling alone is better, while others prefer to be in a group when they travel. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Travel is an individualistic choice, and depends on a boundless list of personal preferences. Travelling solo or in group is a part of that list. Travelling in group is my personal preference. With Facebook and YouTube promoting Solo Travels, even though people are going crazy over solo trips, I always travel with either my family members or my friends, not because I'm scared of travelling alone. Here I present various reasons to support my choice.
Travelling solo may seem exciting, but it has its drawbacks as well. One of them is lack of acquaintances. Travel acquaintances are important for various purposes, such as medical emergencies, or emergency phone calls or any other emergency situations, especially if someone is traveling to a remote and lonesome locations or on a dangerous trekking. Let's suppose, I'm an introvert, hence I simply enjoy lone time, and I'm on a trek to the Himalayas by myself. Suddenly during a long hike, I get caught up with mountain or hill diarrhoea. I truly believe that in these desperate times, a group of people as travel buddies, or family members, or even a tour guide, would have been lifesavers.
Travelling in groups is economical. Travelling in groups will help me to not cut down on my wishlist and fun activities such as scuba-diving, or sky-diving, or shopping. When travelling solo, people need to fix their budgets at let's say, $5,000. The entire trip needs to be planned and executed with that amount. When travelling in groups, the total budget and expenses are shared among the group members.
Also, travelling in groups help me to make new connections, if I'm a part of a group other than my family and friends. I'm a gregarious person and meeting new people, learning about their cultures (if they are foreigners). are bullet points in my list of hobbies. For instance, I, along with my parents, was on a trip to the northern park of the state of Sikkim, India. We had four French Students and a lady from Kenya with us on the team. Throughout that tour, I was able to learn about French Culture and life of people in Kenya.
To sum up, I personally choose to travel in groups, given the various advantages of travelling in groups.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, well, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81746031746 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83821996459 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568783068783 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7144420395 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1739130435 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4347826087 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220770853013 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718845992738 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584618826285 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131957281685 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423416076815 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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