Some people think that traveling alone is better, while others prefer to be in a group when they travel. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's world, where social media has become all about highlighting just how much better your life is than others, most people now crave for attention from others and like to surround themselves with people. Personally, I believe that traveling with a group is more fun and enjoyable than being alone. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, I am not sure that being from the current generation has an influence on my choice of travelling with a group. I feel that I will be able to explain on this topic better, as I have expereinced both traveling alone and in a group. Last year when the pandemic struck and after being inside the house for almost 6 months,I needed to get out of the house. And since it was nessecary to avoid any human contact, I was left with the choice of traveling alone. Where with my bike I left for the adventures in the Devnagri Forest. In my honest opinion, I didn't feel that fresh and energetic after the trip as I usually do. Most of the time, I felt lonely with ample of time to kill and finding different things to do. As, before normally when I went on a vacation or a trip with my family or friends, or smetimes even just with random group of people. I did enjoyed and felt better afte the experience. The reasons I think I felt this way are that, I like to socialize, get to know other people, listen to their stories, share my experience with others and most importantly understand other people's perspectives of the world.
Secondly, current psychological reports suggest that currently people go insane after being alone for time of just over a month. For instance, take "Life of Pie' an Oscar-nominated movie. In that movie through the main character it is shown the gradual mental effect a person has after being alone for a longer time. Also, there are startups of new traveling groups and tours emerging all over the world, and they have been growing at a good pace. Why is it so? The only possible answer is that people are more interested in traveling in group. Hotels too have seen the trend to get booked before the pandemic all at once most of the times, because people find it much better option to travel with someone and share their expereince with. We as humans have been brought up with the culture to gather and socialize. As this is the main reason behind most of the festivals that are celebrated.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that it is always a better and exciting experience to travel with a group. This is because our human tendency to be around humans just like animals who like to stay in a pack and also because alone time is just for some few people to get time off of from the people they are usually surrounded with.
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...th the culture to gather and socialize. As this is the main reason behind most of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 52.1666666667 159% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2249.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 502.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48007968127 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4253763169 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49203187251 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 717.3 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5331740427 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7083333333 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04166666667 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232118499438 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068171790209 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543316962648 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152762092542 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179304129975 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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