Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
we are living at an era when the young generations are liable to enjoy periodic vocations to invigorate their spirits after tedious loads of work. when it comes to choosing travelling alone or in groups, to some extent, probably the decision is contigent on one's character. Nevertheless, according to my thorough considerations, traveling in groups is a better opt from the side of security and the side of finance to the side of pleasure.
Primarily, though we all aspire to release tensions and seek for pleasure in a trip, when we practically make schedules, security invariably stands as the most significant factor to consider. Whatever cities or counties we are about to visit, even the place entitled to be the most organized one, risks and riots loom. Paying a visit to an unfamiliar country alone has considerably increase the possibility that we entrap ourselves with insidious hazards for one will get conspicuous and easily identified if he is isolated from throngs, let alone the terrible situation that no acquainted one can rescue him instantly. take one of my colleagues who went to hangzhou alone as an example, she was greatly at loose ends when a hideous robber threatened her to give all of her money, eventually she became deranged and flustered when hearing anything about trips or hangzhou, needless to say, that horrible encounter must exert irresistibly negative effects in her whole life. Conversely, this kind of concerns can be alleviated if we are sticked to our companions, it's indisputable that without a robber dares to chanllenge and confront with a group of people, isn't it?
Furthermore, travelling in groups will definitely counteract part of financial burdens foisted on us in a trip. The power of an agglomeration of travelling partners will be witnessed evidently when hailing a cab, booking a hotel, reserving a meal, or even purchasing local specialties. Afterall, no saler would reject to give a slight discount on a group of people, besides that, when some fixed expense are allocated to several people equally, the pressure could be lessoned anyway.
In the third place, encounters with embarrassments are put in our way. Imaging how drab and void it would be if we can't share our exultant emotions instantly with others and get feedbacks? Or how pitiful it is when you are touched greatly by a marvelous landscape but can't have a photo with the assist of your companion? it is partly due to these intimate and warm contacts with our friends that we can ultimately be vigorous enough to brace ourselves for future pights.
concerning all the factors mentioned above, merits encompassed within traveling in groups enable us to amplify the pleasure, lesson the financial burden, and most overridingly, safeguard the whole journey. security must take precedence over all other things, everyone must bear in mind that and chew the cud before planning for a journey.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, besides, but, conversely, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, third, kind of, in the third place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2433.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07933194154 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88917179975 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597077244259 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 775.8 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.6556004837 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.117647059 100.406767564 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1764705882 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102501994825 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359230737138 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304647210651 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616172200266 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029915362834 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 147.0 86.8835125448 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.