: Some people like to work at home, while others prefer to work in the office. Which do you prefer and why?
There is no shortage of debate that everyone has their own preferred work methods, and all of them have their benefits. it is very challenging for workers to choose a place for their job since the quality of their works strongly depends on the place. The controversial question which arises here is whether it is beneficial to work in an office or at home. As far as I am concerned, it is better to work in an office than at home. I feel this way for two reasons which will be explored in the following paragraphs.
First of all, one should take into account the fact that working in an office allows me to focus on specific areas of a subject that I am struggling with, rather than doing a broad overview of the documents. I always attend the office and communicate with my co-workers, so I am readily aware of the status quo in the company and my country. As a result, I can boost my concentration, and working efficiently. In contrast, when I have to work at home some several factors such as watching television, speaking with my family, talking with the telephone are interrupted me when I am in the middle of the work. my own experience is a compelling answer. after I graduated from university five years ago I had stocked in a dilemma to join a company that offered to work in a semi-private office or another one who offered to work at home. I eventually decided to work at home, but I have perceived working at home was an inaccurate choice. Not only did I suffer from fatigue and lethargy when I was at home, but also I could barely focus on my works to examine them. The following year, though, I was a bit more diligent about my decisions, and finally changed my job and started to work with a company that offered me an office. Consequently, I progressed in my job since I could readily focus on my works.
another remarkable reason to illuminate why I choose office is I personally prefer to make all of my decisions with consulting my colleague which makes it easier to succeed in my personal and professional pursuits. In a crucial situation that I have to decide immediately, it is better to be in office because I can consult with someone who is accomplished enough, and I can carefully weigh my options. On the other hand, when I am working at home the only person that can help me is my family. Although they are familiar with my characteristics, the decisions that I have to make are indispensable and it needs a person who has knowledge about business and is adopted enough. For instance, when I was a freshman, I was working for a company, yet I always worked at home because I had compulsory university classes. I was facing with different problems, and I could resolve some of them individually, but occasionally, I had to make vital decisions which were difficult for me to analyze it alone, and the only option that I had, was my family who was amateurish and not familiar with my job to help me surmount those problems. Had I consult with an experienced person such as my co-workers in the office, I would have made a decision effectively.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that working in an office can be more effective than at home. this is because working in office lets me focus on subjects better, and because it is such a smart idea to talk with someone who is expertise like our co-worker before we make a decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 93.0 43.0788530466 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 86.0 52.1666666667 165% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2753.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 610.0 407.700716846 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5131147541 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96972615649 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82740504631 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43606557377 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 923.4 618.680645161 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 11.0 1.86738351254 589% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.9567986832 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.708333333 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263072769908 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922067088896 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727627118658 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174954273099 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418630716265 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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