TPO-39- In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.
Contemporary human lives in a sophisticated world where changing is acquiring at a galloping rate. Thus, people have to analyze their job, which want to join on that. The controvesrial question which arises here is whther it was easier to indicate what kind of professions and career push toward prosperous future. If I were to compare, I would definitely belive that it is more convenient for people to examine their jobs and perceive how they can lead toward success. it is my firm belief that todays are more easier than in the past for a numerous reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, one should take into account the fact that the technological developments allow people to have a high fruitful information about their future job. Not only can they stimulate their jobs in software and see the result of that, but also they can consult with wide ranges of company on that field and learn how to use various softwares in their workplace. In contrast, in the past, people never were in touch with high-tech devices and diverse softwares. Consequently, it was demanding for them to predict the future of their jobs. my father experience is a compelling answer. when he was a sophomore at university, he was working as an intern for a civil company. they were encountered with different problems in the following days after they established their company because they did not have plenty of software to analyze the future of their works. As a result, they never had a thriving time with their business.
The second remarkable reason is that job opportunities is more available for people nowadays, so peole have a sense of competition to manage their career in the best form. when they can't accomplish their task, other companies diognase weaknesses and amend them. Therefore, they outweight their option effectively because they do not want to fail in their profession. my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. following my graduation I drew up plans to start a small software development firm. my plan was detailed and I was confident that it would be a success because I analysed it carefully as a result of high competition with companies in todays life. Had I never proposed detailed plans for myself, I would have lost my career as a result of high competition with company.
In conclusion, I strongly belive that it is more easier for people to realize types of career that lead them roward success nowadays; because, technology is developing at a rapid pace and because elemnts of competition increase among people, so they manage their work meticulously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, second, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2209.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93080357143 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80800377565 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526785714286 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0551639539 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.19047619 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7619047619 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160416158912 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489142029727 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540258361944 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120564893254 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589832491266 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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