Some people would like to buy and eat their meals at restaurants frequently while others like to do this at home. which do you prefer?why?
One of current affairs that people are dealing with is their diet because eating enough and heathy foods have a crucial effect on our health. Thus, there are recent debates over whether eating in restaurants is a good choice or preparing their food at home. Different people hold various opinions due to their distinct backgrounds and perspectives. Some people may hold the opinion that eating at home have more advantages than going to restaurants for eating food but other have a negative attitude. As a matter of fact, the issue of how and where we should eat our food is so controversial and complicated that it is impossible to find a universal answer to this question. Nevertheless, I endorse that to some extent I am agreed with the opinion of second group that buying and eating our meal have several beneficial effects on our life. In order to substantiate my vantage points, I would like to address some key evidence; eating meal at restaurants saves time, and also; enables us to find new friends and enjoy our life.
In the first place, when we choose to buy and eat food at restaurants provides a situation that we could save our time. We live in technology era that we have many competitors and we have so many work to do to for earning money and if we do not do in this way, we would drop behind our competitors. If we eat at restaurants, we would not force to buy food materials, wash dishes any more. For example, I work in a company and I go work from 8 in the morning to 8 in the evening so when I come home, I am so exhausted that I am not able to prepare food. Hence, I go restaurant save my time that I could go to bed early.
Along with the same line, another privilege of the aforementioned idea; there are many different kinds of restaurants that we can go so we are able to make new friends and taste different foods such as Italian, Indian, Spanish foods. For instance, there are many restaurants in our state that prepare many kinds of foods from so many diverse parts of the world like French foods. Thereby, many foreign individuals that live in our state go there. Thus, when I go these restaurants, sometimes I make friends with them that I learn new things from them and I have a great time which I enjoy.
To put the issue into perspective, by taking into account these entire aspects, advantages in eating at restaurants weight more than preparing foods at home. Generally, eating meal at restaurants is both fun and helpful with our works in the new world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 191, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun work seems to be countable; consider using: 'many works'.
Suggestion: many works
...we have many competitors and we have so many work to do to for earning money and if we do...
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Line 2, column 344, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'buying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: buying
... eat at restaurants, we would not force to buy food materials, wash dishes any more. F...
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Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...e of the aforementioned idea; there are many different kinds of restaurants that we can go so ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, such as, as a matter of fact, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50220264317 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60860659147 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469162995595 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.5558390013 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.555555556 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266750170494 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925304943101 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649656998829 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167577919436 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842038856611 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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