Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made the world a better place to live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Technological progress is a vital part of our life. So that our life has been more convenient and easier with technology. In spite of the fact that some people believe technological progress made us lazier than before but I disagree with it.
The more technology progress the faster life will be. We can do many things in a short time by using technology. Thus, we can save our time and do many things in order to improve our knowledge about our environment.
Beyond a shadow of doubt technological advances have made the life easy. By using tools like telephone, telescope, computer and so force the life has been easier. Therefore, by means of technology not only we have opportunity not to waste a lot of energy for our work but also we can do many things with spending less energy than before. For example distance education is possible without spending a lot of energy.
In addition, an established-fact that progressing in technology removes obstacles before us. We could find reasons of our difficulties. For instance most diseases would be treated by technology. It should be borne in mind that many diseases are caused due to excessive use of technology.
Finally, communication with each other is comfortable in anywhere in the world. I have a foreign adviser and he gave me good advice that I could do my work faster; as a result, I could have enthusiasm for doing my thesis instead of laziness and do nothing.
In conclusion, technological progress made the life easier for us and we can do many things faster. Hence, we can have more spare time than before the technology that we had to do our work by ourselves with much physical energy but today machines do our work that provides us to be comfortable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... before the technology that we had to do our work by ourselves with much physical...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76923076923 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86663242478 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508361204013 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8147052376 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2222222222 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27777777778 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158419727579 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580949630987 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305965058649 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925170892352 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230394590096 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.