Some students prefer to attend a small university. Others prefer to attend a big university. Discuss the advantages of each. Then indicate which type of university you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Needless to say a university plays a vital role in student's life by providing high standard education. Although some people believe that students should join small university, however, I think that If I get any chance I would definitely like to join a big university. I firmly believe this way owing to several reasons, and I will elaborate on these in susequents paragraph.
To begin with, one significant benefit of joining a big university is a get the oppertunity to learn from renowned professors and outstanding pears. In todays hightly competitive job market a good education is of utmost important. Although, at first it might seems like surviving in a big university need a great effort throught your college life, as many intelligent minds are competeting with you in every examination, but it also brings a significant advatantage in making your concept crystal clear by some means of group discussion with your classmates. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter is profoundly influenced by my own experience. You see, I completed my gradutaion from one of the big universities in India and I feel privileged to get the opportunity to interact with some brilliant mind from all over the world. Moreover, I was blessed to learn from excellent faculty.Moreover, I must feel honored to complete my final year project under Prof. Wong, guest lecturer from Standform University. For this reason, if I had never joined this big university, I would have never reached so far after my graduation.
Secondly, another notable benefit of joining big universities is great exposure, building network. Big universities usually build collaboration with other big universities. Therefore, students are given chance to travel and get the taste of edication and cultures of different universities through student exchange program. Moreover, big universities always award their students for their achieverment, which motivates them to work hard. Drawing from own experence, I remember when I was in college, I meet so many great minds including professors and students and now they are the contact for futures. Building such a great network not only helped me in landing a great job after graduation, but also I always gets motivated to continiue my learning. For this reason, I would strongly suggest anyone to join a big university indeed.
In the light of the above mentioned reasons, universities always improve the prospect of life and no one should make any second thought if they get chance to join a big university.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, i feel, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2132.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17475728155 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04733372191 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2090526132 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.210526316 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6842105263 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198995253211 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671006048946 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570900497413 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120238413091 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419445640839 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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