Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Friends are integretal part of our life no matter how old we are. Although, some people believe that they find it interesting new friends, I think that I would love to spend quality time with my old friends instead of making new one. I firmly believe this way owing to several reasons, and I will elaborate on these facts in detail in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, one very significant reason behind keeping old friends are old friends are very close to our heart and very similar in. The more we spend time together, the more it strengthen the bonding among us.They are one with whom we can share every secret of our life. I admit that my opinion on this matter is great;y influenced by my own exerience. You see, when I was in nursery, I met some friends which eventually formed into a group of ten girls. I can't remember no year passed, we havn't planned for any trip together. I feel overhelmed when I see no one of them don't forget to send birthday wishes that too exactly on 12 AM of 24 th May every year. For this reason, If I had never met this girl gang, I would never realized what true friendship is.
Secondly, old friends always stay by your side, no matter which situation you are in. A true friend is a friend in need. They are like cherry on the cake. They are always eager to share happiness as well as console me in my bad times. Drawing from my own experience, I remember when I was in class ten , I lost grandmother just one month before my board exam. I was so devastated that I could not concentrate on my studies well. I feel so grateful to one of my old friends Riya as she spent almost 3 days with me and allowed me to cry on her lap. Moreover, she took the initiative and planned for a picnic with other friends including me just to make me feel better. As a result, I was able to conquer the bad moment of my life and I also secured fifth in the board exam. Therefore, I feel that I would never try to make new friends leaving my old friends away.
In the light of the above mentioned reasons, I would always love to hang out with my old friends and keep them in my heart.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, i feel, i think, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29207920792 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33663493635 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542079207921 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8160288846 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5714285714 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2380952381 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95238095238 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226139176556 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723123390909 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768992405119 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145683763665 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207176578443 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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