Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There has been a ton of debate about whether the earlier life was more comfortable and easier than the today's one. If I were asked to choose, I would definitely say that life today is way less difficult than previous. I firmly believe this way because of number of reasons and I will develop this idea in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, there is a well known quote called "health is wealth". Earlier days, people didn't have the access to several life saving medicine what current generation has. I think this is due to the technological advancement and great investment in research and which in turn has improved the life expectancy. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter is profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, when I was in fifth standard, I had some serious eye injury and few doctors even told me that I might loss my vision. But doctor's of one of the best national eye institutes of my country did their best and finally cured me up. Hence, I believe that this was only possible because of great advancement in medical field. Therefore, I believe that If I would have born in earlier years, I would have ended up by loosing my vision.
Secondly, I believe that there has been immense investment and growth in economy. During my grandfather's day, not everyone used to get the opportunity to build a career or work on their own choice because of the monetary condition of their family. At the very early age, they were supposed to work with their parents in order to feed the family. Moreover, education was quite rare for women. Drawing from my own personal experience, I feel so fortunate that even being a women, my parents always gives me motivation and provided me the chance to do my engineering. Thus, not only I am able to pursue my dream, but also able to support my family financially. Furthermore, economical growth has enabled people to earn adequately so that they can even invest on their enjoyment and consequently, have a better and healthier life.
In light of the above mentioned passages, I strongly believe that the today's life is much more comfortable than earlier.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...h is wealth'. Earlier days, people didnt have the access to several life saving ...
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Line 3, column 785, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had born'?
Suggestion: had born
...l field. Therefore, I believe that If I would have born in earlier years, I would have ended up...
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Line 5, column 470, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...ce, I feel so fortunate that even being a women, my parents always gives me motivation ...
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Line 5, column 472, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
..., I feel so fortunate that even being a women, my parents always gives me motivation ...
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Line 5, column 672, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ort my family financially. Furthermore, economical growth has enabled people to earn adequ...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...d passages, I strongly believe that the todays life is much more comfortable than earl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, i feel, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.744 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7153371798 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557333333333 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0785797028 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6315789474 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7368421053 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52631578947 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144712502984 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461278622737 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565948580595 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114757371415 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061746581721 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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