Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Recently there has been a ton of debate about whether there will be an increase in the number of vehicles in next twenty years. Allthough some people believe that demands no of cars in near future will drop significantly, however I believe that the line curve of figure with repect to time will continue to rise up. I firmyly believe this way owing to several reasons, and I will elaborate on this idea in the subsequent paragraphs.

To begin with, one of the driving factor behind this is increased population over time. As the population increases, the more no of people will start availing the public transport. The increase in the demand of public transports wlll leads to increase in the no of vehicles, like bus, auto, train etc. Moreover, this will increase traffic congession, and hence, more time consumed waiting on the traffic. I have to admit that Imy opinion on this matter is profoundly influenced by my own experienece. You see, while working in my first company in 2016, I used to travel in train for around 2 hours to commute to office . I used to be frustrated as I used to spend this entire time doing no productive work. Moreover, I got so stresses after reaching office that I couldn't even concentrate on my work. As result, I had to buy my own car. For this reason, I believe that along with the increase in no of public vehicles, there will a high demand in private car as well.

Secondly, another important factor is advancement in automobile industry will produce less expensive cars. Hence, more no of people will be able to afford their own private car. Moreover. Now a days, the income of common people has increased as compared to the old days which insists them to buy private cars to spend lavish life. Drawing from my own experience, when me and my sister together joined our first company, we decided to gift a car to our parents. Back then, Hyndai company was also offering discounts on the first purchase to attract new customers. As a result, we were able to buy our first car. It certainly clear that if I had never planned to spend money on buying a new car, I would have never be able to enjoy long drives with my family like I do now.

In the light of the above mentioned points, I strongly believe that there will be high demand of cars in the twenty years. This is because of increased population and improvent in the automobile industry.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...though some people believe that demands no of cars in near future will drop signif...
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Line 1, column 373, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e this way owing to several reasons, and I will elaborate on this idea in the sub...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
.... As the population increases, the more no of people will start availing the publi...
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Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ransports wlll leads to increase in the no of vehicles, like bus, auto, train etc....
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Suggestion: .
... for around 2 hours to commute to office . I used to be frustrated as I used to sp...
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Line 3, column 765, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: couldn't
...o stresses after reaching office that I couldnt even concentrate on my work. As result,...
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Line 3, column 897, Rule ID: NOW[2]
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Suggestion: now
...believe that along with the increase in no of public vehicles, there will a high d...
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Line 3, column 969, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...l a high demand in private car as well. Secondly, another important factor is ad...
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Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: NOW[2]
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Suggestion: now
...roduce less expensive cars. Hence, more no of people will be able to afford their ...
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Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...e able to afford their own private car. Moreover. Now a days, the income of common peopl...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...afford their own private car. Moreover. Now a days, the income of common people has increa...
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Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...rd their own private car. Moreover. Now a days, the income of common people has increa...
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Line 5, column 626, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
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Suggestion: clears
...able to buy our first car. It certainly clear that if I had never planned to spend mo...
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Line 5, column 715, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
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Suggestion: been
...on buying a new car, I would have never be able to enjoy long drives with my famil...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... improvent in the automobile industry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59112149533 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52560418327 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511682242991 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5902940035 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3181818182 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168515203568 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520171748821 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494804310149 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107458249141 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139677985662 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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