You have been told that dormitory rooms at your university must be shared by two students. Would you rather have the university assign a student to share a room with you, or would you rather choose your own roommate? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
There are certain qualities that we look for while choosing roommates. Although some students believe that they would prefer the university assign a student to share a room with to avoid spending time on something of less importance in their college life, however, I would always prefer to choose my roommate by my own based on certain qualities. I firmly believe this way owing to several reasons, and I will elaborate on these ideas in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, when it comes to choosing a roommate, I would definitely look for a roommate who is open minded and willing to cooperate in every aspect. While living in a dormitory, we usually share the electricity bill, food, rent, to name a few. Needless to say, every household chore demands the people to be co-operative. It is not always possible to get someone who is compatible in every aspect so that no conflict arises between them. Rather, it is more important that the roommates are always eager to resolve any issue no matter how difficult it is to overcome in our daily life. Unless someone is very open to listen to you, it's quite impossible to stay with him or her. I have to admit that My opinion on this matter is profoundly influenced by my own experience. You see, when I was doing my graduation, I stayed in a university dormitory with Rita for four years. Regardless of whether she was from a different religion, she was so co-operative that we managed to share every household work from the initial day itself. Moreover, She was so kind and always used to address any problem with an open mindset and I strongly believe that this is very rare to find. For this reason, if I let the university choose a roommate for me, I would have never spent my dormitory life so peacefully like I did.
Secondly, students aim to enter the universities in order to gain knowledge. Group studies play an important role in our college days. Sharing room contributes to group study in a great way as students may have some discussion at their convenience to make their concepts better. Moreover, They can share their notes and prepare for the examination together. Drawing from my own experience, during my college days, I remember when I used to stay with Rita, we used to make routines to follow everyday so that we don't face difficulties before the exam. Moreover, we used to discuss every topic the professor teaches in classes. From the first day only, we made a habit of solving competitive programming questions which really helped us in landing a good job after completing our graduation. So it's certainly clear to say that I made the best decision to choose my roommates on my own.
In light of the above mentioned reasons, I would definitely like to choose my roommates by my own instead of letting the university arrange for me.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2347.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 493.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76064908722 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70610586278 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 764.1 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2510369929 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.043478261 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4347826087 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17391304348 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248333352793 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634419530444 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589189172928 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150202477698 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033671376807 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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