Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
As we live in a world in which education plays a vital role in forming the future for students, teachers need to determine the best method for teaching. It has been debated for a long time among professionals that whether it is better for students to study alone or work on a team. Some believe that studying alone will provide students with better conditions to focus and work, while others believe that working in groups will increase productivity and ends with better results. I believe in the latter, and I have three compelling reasons for my preference, which I will explore in the coming essay.
First of all, working in a team will get better results due to synergy among students. When students are supposed to solve a problem in groups, they can divide it into smaller tasks, and each one will take responsibility for their assignment. In this manner, learning complicated and demanding materials can become easy and consume less time than learning the same material alone.Working in a group allows students to absorb the content precisely and understand every aspect of it.
Secondly, survey results show that materials taught through engaging and interacting are learned better than the others.Working in teams makes students talk and communicate with each other, and they truly can experience the process of learning. For example, my sister was supposed to learn an important subject and prepare slides for her biology class. She did not perform as well as she wanted until she joined a group and started learning with them.
Finally, one significant role of teachers is to prepare students for the future. There are very few career paths that can operate in isolation.
As an employee in almost any industry, people are required to work closely with others. That is why employers prefer to hire people who have demonstrated their ability to work as a part of a team. Teamwork teaches essential skills such as having active listening and effective speaking and will prepare students for career advancement in the future.
To wrap it up, not only does teamwork have tremendous outputs and results, but also it prepares students to face the challenges in their future life and career better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00543478261 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6373819059 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7326689539 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.125 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173828230694 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529064260062 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463229536522 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792156618338 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442634731484 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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