Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to improve the quality of education in a country is to increase teachers’ salaries.
Education is considered to be one of the most, if not the most, important factors in determining the future of a nation. In this regard, authorities have tried different policies to increase the productivity of the education system and prepare students to form the society and guide it in the coming years. one way to achieve this goal is to increase teachers' salaries. Although there are some people who do not agree with this approach, I personally agree and will elucidate my reasons in the coming paragraphs.
First and foremost, having paid enough will eliminate the need for searching for another job. If someone is preoccupied with the basic needs, he or she cannot focus on their tasks thoroughly.
Teachers are not exceptions, and this fact applies to them as well. For example, in my country, teachers were paid less in the past, and they had to find a second job or manage other projects simultaneously in order to make their ends meet. But in recent years government has increased their payments, and they are more satisfied and focused. They are working with their whole heart, and students are more engaged too. If it had not been for the change in their salaries , there would be a catastrophe in our education system due to the low quality of teaching at schools. Teachers are the valuable assets of the country and neglecting them will take it's toll in the long run.
Furthermore, the more the salary, the more talented people will be attracted to the education system. one crucial factor in choosing a job for talented people is the level of income. they mostly tend to work for high paying companies rather than the education system. increasing teachers salary would be a great motivation for these talents to join education system and work as a teacher. These people will implement the latest and most productive methods while teaching, and students will get the materials in a more efficient way. Another reason is that students always look up to their teachers and accept their guidance rather than their parents. This fact shows the important role that teachers play in their student's life. So influential are teachers that make it essential for the government to pay attention to them.
To sum up, not only does increasing teachers' salaries make them become more focused, but also it attracts more talented people to the educational system. Increasing teachers' salaries would be a win-win policy, and both teachers and the government will benefit from that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, second, so, well, while, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94033412888 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60210537468 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510739856802 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3324104555 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0909090909 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0454545455 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205777074873 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645628698615 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04966356558 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122901375018 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553312823011 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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