Some students like to take distance-learning courses by computer. Other students prefer to
study in traditional classroom settings with a teacher. Consider the advantages of both
options, and make an argument for the way that students should organize their schedules.
The above presented question brings the controversial issue of whether distance learning or traditional classroom learning is better. Both learning methods have their own advantages causing them to be adopted by several student groups. Distance learning is a highly flexible education setting which enables you to learn anytime, anywhere according to your daily schedule. For example, you don’t have to move to USA to get an education from a prestigious institution and benefit from the high quality academics. You can stay at your hometown where you live with your parents and friends and still get a quality education meaning you don’t need to go through any social adaptation process and experience little financial hardship. Along with the locational flexibility, the flexible learning hours will make it easier to schedule your program and along with school a student can also work at a professional job. This learning method is especially advantageous for people experiencing financial hardships and students who wants to pursue an academic degree while working at a full-time job.
On the other hand, the traditional classroom education with a physical teacher and classmates helps you develop in many other ways some of them are academic and some of them not. A university of a high-school building is a learning complex consisting of high quality laboratories where students can experiment and learn physically and libraries that offers a wide range of book selection where they can learn outside the classroom. However, the most important advantage is the opportunity to communicate with people sharing same academic interests which is an important part of education. Along with the social interactions we had, the inflexibility of a classroom environment force us to be organized and makes it easier to concentrate the lecture.
The advantages of traditional learning at a physical entity appeals me more since the social bonds I develop with my friends and teachers increases my ability to learn. Thanks to the physical interactions I have with my teachers, they understand under what conditions I learn better. Also, the education continues outside the classroom when we are walking from one class to another with my friends and discussing the course material. Also, I believe adapting to campus life or moving to another city is beneficial in terms of personal development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...nderstand under what conditions I learn better. Also, the education continues outside ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36507936508 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96570168212 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544973544974 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.1126009817 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.2 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280282313471 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925677773853 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520556203222 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185448283832 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563307489836 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 11.7677419355 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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