Spending money
By and large, it is beyond doubt that money is an integral part of our lives. In this regard, people should value it and save it for the time of financial crisis. There is no shortage of debates among scholars whether money should be spent on buying expensive things or for a trip. As for the writer's opinion, I subscribe to the idea of utilizing your money on things that are long-lasting. In what follows, I will delve into the most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
The first compelling reason corroborating my opinion is that spending money on expensive things helps a person in difficult times. It is worth mentioning that by expending your money on purchasing long-lasting valuable stuff, for instance, gold or diamonds, you save money indirectly. These items can be utilized in certain financial hard times by selling them. As a result, the money obtained can be consumed to overcome the absurd condition. To illustrate this, 20 years ago when I was a kid, I remember my family had a hard time. Due to an illness, my father lost his job and we had no other source of income. At that time, my mother's expensive gold jewelry got us out of that trouble. She sold her jewelry and took care of us from that money. Moreover, a part of that amount was also utilized to treat my father's disease. Had she not have spent earlier on valuable jewelry, we would not have been able to cope with that bad situation.
This example clearly explains my reason.
The second rationale behind my viewpoint is rooted in the fact that traveling to other places to satisfy a time-being pleasure is a waste of money. Since poverty is an undeniable and sad truth of this world, money should be valued as wasting it is not a sensible approach. It is notable that nowadays, those people also travel who do not have a lot of money. They save it where they can, by taking most of the things and stuff they need from home. Some even bring food with themselves to save few bucks. Vividly, the mentioned point can only be achieved by spending money on the basic needs of life. As a case in mind, 5 years ago, I was living with my friend, Maria, in a college dorm. We used to get a certain amount of pocket money to meet our expenses. She has a bad habit of spending all her money on the first week of the month. By doing parties and going to fancy restaurants, she left out of money soon. She always got in trouble with her father for spending money on wasteful stuff. When his father got retired, Maria got really limited money as a stipend. Then it was difficult for her to meet her expenses in less money she received. If she had a habit of saving money, she would not have faced problems afterwords.
By perusing the above paragraphs, one can infer although money brings happiness if you travel, happiness does not bring you food. For the sake of brevity, a couple of reasons are worth reiterating, first, money aids in hard situations, second, spending it on traveling is just a waste. So I vehemently urge people to get to know the value of money and do not waste it by spending it on worthless things.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'writers'' or 'writer's'?
Suggestion: writers'; writer's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, really, second, so, then, as for, for instance, as a result, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2540.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 564.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50354609929 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87326216964 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48428489612 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 212.727598566 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501773049645 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 788.4 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5807188344 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.9696969697 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0303030303 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404935621044 0.236089414692 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110813518988 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105035701825 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219208651818 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138959498335 0.0645574589148 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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