Telecommuting (working for a company from home rather than in the office and communicating with the office by computer) is becoming more and more common. Discuss the advantages of telecommuting versus working in the office. Then indicate which you prefer and why.
The widespread use of internet and communication technology has impacted our life in various forms. People can work staying at home rather than going to an office; which is called telecommuting. Working in an office has its own benefits as it supports working with fun in a team and one can just dedicate only office hour for their work. But the liberty of working from home has provided various benefits in our life. In my opinion, it is better to work staying at home rather than working in office for various reasons which I will describe in the following paragraph.
To begin with, telecommuting has made our work easier. Working from home not only saves time but also makes work more interesting. With the internet connected computer, we can easily catch up the meetings online, prepare reports and correspond it to the recepient or accompolish work whatever it is that relates to use of electornic materials. One shouldnot rush early morning for catching up train to work or worry about wearing a nice suits for work as working from home gives these benefits. Working from home gives us opportunity to be with family and spend quality time without worrying about the work.
In the another hand, for a nightowl like me, who prefer to work till late night and wake up late made the work super interesting. I usually prefer to work at night wearing comfortable pajamas. Had it been a office, I should worry about preparing the suits to wear early in the morning.
Moreover, working from home provides additional entertainments as I can enjoy my personal life watching comedy shows or youtube videos while doing work. Had it been it office, I should follow the rule and strictly dedicate my time at work which is often boring and monotonous. Telecommuting has provided the benefits to rejoice the work I do as there is no any strict rules to follow and I can enjoy my personal time and space at full extend.
To conclude, telecommuting has provided us opportunity to work from home by spending quality time with family, entertaining ourself and working on our own schedule. Thus, I prefer working from home.
What matters is whether we are using this opportunity for our benefits or making ourself lazy and compromised.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'suit'?
Suggestion: suit
...n to work or worry about wearing a nice suits for work as working from home gives the...
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Line 3, column 609, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y time without worrying about the work. In the another hand, for a nightowl like...
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Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...earing comfortable pajamas. Had it been a office, I should worry about preparing ...
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Line 7, column 355, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ts to rejoice the work I do as there is no any strict rules to follow and I can en...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85602094241 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67540419665 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492146596859 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8838810254 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6315789474 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1052631579 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373360633088 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141184287557 0.076458572812 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760920577495 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193167742542 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102792376187 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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